[cir] Valle

tomyhy · Post by **tomyhy** » Sun Aug 29, 2010 11:41 am

Hi, I'm new and this is my first track. Enjoy!

BRIX · Post by **BRIX** » Sun Aug 29, 2010 11:54 am

Is this really your first track

All very nice, but the concrete walls a little bit ill-arranged

Post by **XYY** » Sun Aug 29, 2010 12:33 pm

For a first track really good. But

concrete walls look not so good. And you should make some gaps (if a car goes over the wall, it cant come bak

)
And you might also try some dithering. but keep them coming

Zaximillian · Post by **Zaximillian** » Sun Aug 29, 2010 2:40 pm

One thing I like about the walls is the Y shape they make after the twin hairpin (in Turn 5). That I'd keep.

Post by **Trigger Happy** » Mon Aug 30, 2010 2:12 pm

Layout is OK, but there is too much walls everywhere.

Check some track e.g. of Bouncebackability or AleksiNir to see more.

And the landscape is too empty. This tutorial will help you to plan better environment.

I'm looking forward to your next try.

Thunderstrucker · Post by **Thunderstrucker** » Mon Aug 30, 2010 4:38 pm

Brix wrote:Is this really your first track

Your first track here was too good to be a first track too.

But this one is good.