Dortuyi is a short track in forest area.
It's the first track I've published(not the first I've made, though).
[cir] Dortuyi
- Emil Patanen
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Re: [cir] Dortuyi
Almost perfect track, HJ. Even better, than I expected from screenshot.
2 very small cons: the grandstand in top-right - just 2 stands would be enough instead of 3. And then maybe too much oil in texture of the cliff.
4,75/5.
2 very small cons: the grandstand in top-right - just 2 stands would be enough instead of 3. And then maybe too much oil in texture of the cliff.
4,75/5.
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Re: [cir] Dortuyi
too much oil at that cliffs.
Dithering in pitlane looks a bit too "gimpish", if you know what I mean. And I'd really appreciate if you made a kerb in bottom-right corner.
But except those points a really good track. 4,75/5
Dithering in pitlane looks a bit too "gimpish", if you know what I mean. And I'd really appreciate if you made a kerb in bottom-right corner.
But except those points a really good track. 4,75/5
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Last track: Meadowdale Raceways - Last car: Ford Falcon GTHO Phase III
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Last track: Meadowdale Raceways - Last car: Ford Falcon GTHO Phase III
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Re: [cir] Dortuyi
Yes, I know what you mean by this.XYY wrote:Dithering in pitlane looks a bit too "gimpish", if you know what I mean.
And thanks for those comments, especially about the cliff. :] It was the thing, with which I was most unsure if it looks good.
Next time I will ask for others' opinion before making the final cliff.
Latest releases:
Tracks: [ovl] Riabate | [cir] Yeavy | [mic] [ovl] Xandom ||| More at My Website
Cars: [cpk] Update of Original GeneRally Cars by Emil
Tracks: [ovl] Riabate | [cir] Yeavy | [mic] [ovl] Xandom ||| More at My Website
Cars: [cpk] Update of Original GeneRally Cars by Emil
Re: [cir] Dortuyi
or watch a tutorial!
Here you should find many video tutorials by Darjo. They are really helpful and you only need paint
Here you should find many video tutorials by Darjo. They are really helpful and you only need paint
My e-mail-address:xyyverwaltung@googlemail.com
Last track: Meadowdale Raceways - Last car: Ford Falcon GTHO Phase III
All of my tracks
Last track: Meadowdale Raceways - Last car: Ford Falcon GTHO Phase III
All of my tracks