[cir] Dortuyi

Gravel, tarmac, snow. Whatever the surface, you'll find it here.
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Emil Patanen
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Dortuyi is a short track in forest area.

It's the first track I've published(not the first I've made, though).
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Almost perfect track, HJ. :up: Even better, than I expected from screenshot.

2 very small cons: the grandstand in top-right - just 2 stands would be enough instead of 3. And then maybe too much oil in texture of the cliff. ;)

4,75/5. :bg:
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:iagree: too much oil at that cliffs.
Dithering in pitlane looks a bit too "gimpish", if you know what I mean. And I'd really appreciate if you made a kerb in bottom-right corner.
But except those points a really good track. 4,75/5
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XYY wrote:Dithering in pitlane looks a bit too "gimpish", if you know what I mean.
Yes, I know what you mean by this.

And thanks for those comments, especially about the cliff. :] It was the thing, with which I was most unsure if it looks good.
Next time I will ask for others' opinion before making the final cliff.
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or watch a tutorial!
Here you should find many video tutorials by Darjo. They are really helpful and you only need paint ;)
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