[cir] Jimbob

[chapnis]

A peaceful beachside racetrack is a long one complemented by high capacity of seating for fans and a strikingly creative name. It is a completely flat track as the creator of the universe (i.e. me) hasn't yet managed to do HMap without mucking the track up.

Any and all constructive criticism will be much appreciated. There is a "clean" version and then a "messy" version where I got out the spray can on paint and went nuts

Hope you enjoy it.

Edit: V2 added.

[zgr]

a bit poor of objects
6/10

[chapnis]

Any tips? I'm a real noob so I don't know what to add.

[zgr]

for this beachtrack...maybe:
- more palms
- not only bushes along the way
- sth. behind the pitbuiling
- hmap
- lmap details
- maybe more walls
puuh, thats it

[chapnis]

Thanks, what is sth. behind pitting? And is there any really beginners way to do hmap?

[zgr]

sth. behind pitbuildings - that means, that you could make more objects behind the buildings of the pits
and hmap for beginner...mmh...just make high points, whre you want and then smooth all

[Lukeno94]

Also, that pitlane feels odd to me, why doesn't it end joined to the track? Does the circuit itself have any HMAP? Also, try playing around with the angle/zoom settings, to show less of the blue sky. I don't like the rectangular corners that aren't smoothed, nor the oil patches on them. Try to vary the tree types and placements in one place, and add some bushes and stones. Also, add some more dithering on the tarmac, grass and sand. That said, the layout has potential, and the track deserves a V2 after a lot of work is put in.

And zegarek, please write in proper English, as I don't know what "sth." means, and I am actually English...

[chapnis]

Thanks for the tips. Will try and make a V2 over the next few days...

[chapnis]

V2 added. Thoughts?