[ral] Finland

Gravel, tarmac, snow. Whatever the surface, you'll find it here.
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Jarmoluh
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[ral] Finland

Post by Jarmoluh »

Hmm... what can i say. I'm new here but some people know me from the Polish side Generally.
I give you my best route wrc. :rally:
Enjoy :)
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Re: [ral] Finland

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Yeah, one can really see, that you're not a total beginner in trackmaking: from looks I would say you've made a pretty decent rally stage as a beginning. Maybe I'm just not keen with the snowy road, I think that one should be rather dirtier than the fields. Out of that, a nice track you've been made, keep it going! :bg:
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Re: [ral] Finland

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:iagree:

4\5 points :D
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Re: [ral] Finland

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Yeah, great stage. :up: Only con for me is that ugly house-mass in the middle. If you would simply it by using less houses, it could look better I guess. Otherwise great stage with superb atmosphere. I can give even 4,8/5 :bg: I'm looking for more. :wave:
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Re: [ral] Finland

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:iagree:

I see some flaws at lmap but whatever, they are actually part of specific style which is great :hyper:
btw it looks more like Rally Norway than Finland (maybe it is Arctic Rally Lapland :scratch: )

hope to see more stages from you :cool2:
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Re: [ral] Finland

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I agree with you guys, this track just needs better fences and it will be great, looking forward to your next tracks!
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Re: [ral] Finland

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Few tips:
- Zoom in a bit (so you won't see the border in the bottom)
- Place the trees not evenly far from the road (I'm not sure if I said this in a proper manner)
- That big house in the middle looks quite strange :D
- The snow looks quite plain, try adding a bit of hmap and maybe some dithering (a bit of mud+ice)
- Add some bushes in to the forest to make it more interesting
- You might want to change name since the only place in my heart for a track called [ral] Finland is for the [ral] Finland made by Jukka Räbinä :D
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