Hmm... what can i say. I'm new here but some people know me from the Polish side Generally.
I give you my best route wrc.
Enjoy
[ral] Finland
[ral] Finland
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Re: [ral] Finland
Yeah, one can really see, that you're not a total beginner in trackmaking: from looks I would say you've made a pretty decent rally stage as a beginning. Maybe I'm just not keen with the snowy road, I think that one should be rather dirtier than the fields. Out of that, a nice track you've been made, keep it going!
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Re: [ral] Finland
Yeah, great stage. Only con for me is that ugly house-mass in the middle. If you would simply it by using less houses, it could look better I guess. Otherwise great stage with superb atmosphere. I can give even 4,8/5 I'm looking for more.
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Re: [ral] Finland
I see some flaws at lmap but whatever, they are actually part of specific style which is great
btw it looks more like Rally Norway than Finland (maybe it is Arctic Rally Lapland )
hope to see more stages from you
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Re: [ral] Finland
I agree with you guys, this track just needs better fences and it will be great, looking forward to your next tracks!
Re: [ral] Finland
Few tips:
- Zoom in a bit (so you won't see the border in the bottom)
- Place the trees not evenly far from the road (I'm not sure if I said this in a proper manner)
- That big house in the middle looks quite strange
- The snow looks quite plain, try adding a bit of hmap and maybe some dithering (a bit of mud+ice)
- Add some bushes in to the forest to make it more interesting
- You might want to change name since the only place in my heart for a track called [ral] Finland is for the [ral] Finland made by Jukka Räbinä
- Zoom in a bit (so you won't see the border in the bottom)
- Place the trees not evenly far from the road (I'm not sure if I said this in a proper manner)
- That big house in the middle looks quite strange
- The snow looks quite plain, try adding a bit of hmap and maybe some dithering (a bit of mud+ice)
- Add some bushes in to the forest to make it more interesting
- You might want to change name since the only place in my heart for a track called [ral] Finland is for the [ral] Finland made by Jukka Räbinä
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