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[rwl] [cir] Aldo Scribante
Posted: Fri Oct 15, 2010 4:47 pm
by Bekk
My new Track. Located in South Africa.
Aldo Scribante
~Comment Plz. Thx
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Re: [rwl] [cir] Aldo Scribante
Posted: Fri Oct 15, 2010 7:38 pm
by zsoltbartok
South Africa? You should have made this track a bit earlier and Madd Dogg could have used it in his Vuvuzela Challenge!
Now seriously: I don't know the original track, but this layout is OK for me. The AI line is also good (it's fast). There are some things I miss:
You didn't use sunk tires so it's easy to make shortcuts, to drive way beyond
the kerbs. Also, even if I think that tracks can look nice without much lmap dithering, a little bit of it can definitely improve the wow-effect.
So I think it's a promising track and a little tweaking could make it into a perfect rwl!
Re: [rwl] [cir] Aldo Scribante
Posted: Fri Oct 15, 2010 8:13 pm
by Bekk
Ok.
Thx mizzamar
Re: [rwl] [cir] Aldo Scribante
Posted: Fri Oct 15, 2010 9:20 pm
by Trigger Happy
I agree with mizzamar with many points, I want to just add, that I really miss fencing/walling on external side of tracks, which I can see on fotos (even with additional tyre barriers in some curves). And then try to be more patient with placing of objects like fences or the boats as pits - they will look better. And then try the external editors for making dithering - you'll catch better the reality like contrast between clean grass in the track (represented by grass now) and the dirty dark grass (now mud).
Re: [rwl] [cir] Aldo Scribante
Posted: Fri Oct 15, 2010 9:49 pm
by zgr
there is not much i could say
look at ivo's reply
and one more thing...the lmap tunnel before last turn looks weird...