[cir] Brno

Gravel, tarmac, snow. Whatever the surface, you'll find it here.
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Pako
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[cir] Brno

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Hi, this is my new track - BRNO! It´s a ciricurt...
Please coment, I making a version 2.0 ;)
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Re: [cir] Brno

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Why you release it if you know that you're going to improve it? :really:

And you should think your tracks longer. This is quite boring
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Re: [cir] Brno

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Therefore, it publishes to 2.0 edited by critics!
If you seem to be long lines, so do not go;)
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Re: [cir] Brno

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Well that's why there is a W.I.P -thread.
Track is too empty. It doesn't look good if you just fill it with sand.
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Re: [cir] Brno

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This is not WIP!!! This is a normal version 1.0... And i prepare version 2.0... LOL
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Pako wrote:This is not WIP!!! This is a normal version 1.0... And i prepare version 2.0... LOL
Relax. I meant that you should post a pic of your track in W.I.P -thread, and then improve it and then release it.

Couple of things about the track
- Layout is quite okay
- There is almost no walls at all.
- sand and grass areas are too empty. (and they need some dithering)
- parking area is too big. (you could almost park a house there ;) )
- lack of objects
And the story was whatever was the song what it was
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Re: [cir] Brno

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Just a note - I recommend to you to not use next time name of real city, where are located real circuits, for name of fictional track. It's very confusing. ;)
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Re: [cir] Brno

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Ivo Porč wrote:Just a note - I recommend to you to not use next time name of real city, where are located real circuits, for name of fictional track. It's very confusing. ;)
OK, sorry ;)
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