[roa] Minor Road(update)

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[roa] Minor Road(update)

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Minor Road

Minor Road is a frictional road circuit is some far away village, with some hmap changes around most corners. AI is very strong here so be prepared to get smacked around the track quite a bit :rolleyes:

Hope you enjoy :cflag:

Comments/Feedback more then welcome :nod:

EDIT - A Minor update for you guys,

1.Removed the landmap barn with just a normal styled house ;) looks much better. thanks for the advice
2.added a bit more dirthing
i may update it more, sooner or later :roll:

u can download the new 1 in this ZIP file :coffee:
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Re: [roa] Minor Road

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It's nice and neat track but the Lmap building on middlefield doesn't really work. It would look much better if it was replaced by some ordinary house complex, that's what I quickly did for the track after downloading. As for the rest, I like its freshness and simplicity decorated with some pretty details. Especially well done with flower meadows. :)
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Hm... I don't like the barn as it isn't 3d. But,4.50 from me :)
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Re: [roa] Minor Road

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The quality of your track relies, I think, on the very nice work done on dithering and the ''Road'' feeling (although it would have made it twice as realistic if it would be linked to a road going outside the track... I never saw a loop of tarmac lost in the middle of nowhere! :scratch: ) This is only a suggestion by the way, you make tracks the way you want them to be made!

I think it would only require a bit more experience on Lmap buildings to get the barn right (it takes time and practice, most trackmakers are afraid of LMap buildings, but when you master this art :o Sky's the limit on what you can do with it!) :)

So I'd say the track itself is really nice, it only needs a bit more work on the heart of it which is that barn! :D

Keep up the good work :bg:
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Pretty good but as Speedy47 mentioned, the Lmap barn is way out of perspective :eyes:
Look to the left ----------------> that's to the right, mate :(
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This is the sort of track that makes me wish I could still play GR. Nice little track with a loooong turn being nearly half of the whole track. I have to say that the update was a smart move, since now the track looks complete and very good. I like what you did with the lines on the track, that alone makes the track look fresh. I'm not too sure about the copy paste pattern of the rocks in the background, though, since they look so clearly copy pasted. This part is shown in the picture. If there appears to be some sort of a seam, just hide it. ;)
I also added another square... I'd suggest that you add those circle thingies on that whole area, that you had between the fences, this might make the part look more continuing, since now the circles are a bit separated from everything else.

But as I said in the beginning, as a track this is of top quality! The points I stated are just minor details and nit-pickyness. :) With those little fixes I'd say this could even be nominated. If I just knew how that system actually worked... :P
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@ 1nsane: why can you not play GR?

@ Matty: Great track - good work
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Re: [roa] Minor Road(update)

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thanks for all the comments. ;)

@ 1nsane i made them cliffs look like that on purpose, i wanted them to look straight as they could look, but thanks for the info on the circles and all!
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