[cir] Desert Road
[cir] Desert Road
Here is the first track I made with SnakEditor. I want somebody to tell me what I can improve.
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Sorry for my bad English.
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Wow, very impressive and fast evoluion.
Please add my MSN (cdlyokoh@hotmail.com) and i could send to you a few tips.
A few things what need menction:
1-Do not approach so much 2 far parts of the track, clould cause fail on HMap. Ony do it if you have 99% or more certain that the HMap will not affect other parts.
2-The middle-cutting line doesn't looks good, looks bizarre.
3-Retouch the track on Paint, that round bords on pits aren't good. And you could improve start.
Please add my MSN (cdlyokoh@hotmail.com) and i could send to you a few tips.
A few things what need menction:
1-Do not approach so much 2 far parts of the track, clould cause fail on HMap. Ony do it if you have 99% or more certain that the HMap will not affect other parts.
2-The middle-cutting line doesn't looks good, looks bizarre.
3-Retouch the track on Paint, that round bords on pits aren't good. And you could improve start.
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Improving! Take more time and care when placing objects. The Cactus object is a pain because you need to make sure you vary the direction. You have sort of here, but they are all generally facing the same way.
I agree with Manzur about the pit area, where the tarmac has rounded ends, and maybe the white line in the center of the track could be a dashed line - - - - - - and i'm not a fan of the oil under the stands and blocks.
However its a improvement on your first tracks, keep going, just start taking more time and consideration about what you place into tracks
I agree with Manzur about the pit area, where the tarmac has rounded ends, and maybe the white line in the center of the track could be a dashed line - - - - - - and i'm not a fan of the oil under the stands and blocks.
However its a improvement on your first tracks, keep going, just start taking more time and consideration about what you place into tracks
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It's not oil it's just black I added with paint.
And thanks Manzur but I think my english is too poor to chat. But you can send me mails at : legars85-33@hotmail.fr
And thanks Manzur but I think my english is too poor to chat. But you can send me mails at : legars85-33@hotmail.fr
Sorry for my bad English.
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Uh? IIRC 0-0-0 do the same result as Border and to oil is used 63-63-63...
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For your first Track is that very very very good
I give the Track
I give the Track
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Re: [cir] Desert Road
It's not his first Track. It is his first track he made with Snakeditor.
I don't like the oil under the Stands.
I think i give
I don't like the oil under the Stands.
I think i give
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I also speak a bit of French, so i can talk with you.