[cir] Intro

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Halama
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Three loops. Please comment ;)
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I don't like that super thick finish line and I think that pit lane should have buildings, but the the pit road is nice and overall tracks are great :bg:
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hello Halama! The layout is very good! I liked the track :bg:
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I found the entrance to the pits quite short and rugged half, could have more objects inside of the track ... but good track ...
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The track is awesome :bg: but if you go through the pits you miss a lap.
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maclape wrote:The track is awesome :bg: but if you go through the pits you miss a lap.
I tested that out... I don't think it's necessarily the pits, but it seems like the checkpoints are really strict. I missed a lot of laps where I didn't think I cut the track all that much...
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Halama nice track :)
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quite nice layout :bg: but I miss some more buildings of paddock and somewhere in infield, now it looks a bit empty...btw Over layout is IMO better in anti-clockwise ;-)

good work, I hope you´ll imrpove and we´ll see some fine tracks by you :D :yummy:
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I don't miss any building, it looks like a smaller American club circuit, which can be used as testing ground or education course too. The landscape in background is enough for me. Just few objects looks placed little bit messy (especially some parts of walling). 4.6/5 :bg:
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GeneSuomi wrote:I don't like that super thick finish line and I think that pit lane should have buildings, but the the pit road is nice and overall tracks are great :bg:
:iagree:
You should cancel the check of S/F Line and paint it, I think.
But three loops really nice! the layout are great! :bg:
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The only layout that I noticed the line on was the full layout, the others were OK. But other than that line, this track was very good!
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