This is my first track, hope you like it.
[cir] Yiezi
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Darkenedflame22
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[cir] Yiezi
hi all.
This is my first track, hope you like it.
This is my first track, hope you like it.
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Twitter: darknessflame22
Last.fm: darknessflame22
"i owe you a ten second car" - Brian O'Connor, The Fast And The Furious
Re: [cir] Yiezi
Hi Darkenedflame22,
Welcome in the forum !
I'm not the best person for advising on trackmaking around here, but here you are some basic advices :
The trees are too regularly placed and choosed (all the same). The road width is too wide (even if that's a matter of taste), the lines could be smoother particularly if you export your work on a graphic programm (gimp, paint, photoshop,..) then you could make some dithering and finally the pit-lane is a shortcut which isn't appreciated by everyone..
So, a little bit more work could be made but that's not a bad first track.
Welcome in the forum !
I'm not the best person for advising on trackmaking around here, but here you are some basic advices :
The trees are too regularly placed and choosed (all the same). The road width is too wide (even if that's a matter of taste), the lines could be smoother particularly if you export your work on a graphic programm (gimp, paint, photoshop,..) then you could make some dithering and finally the pit-lane is a shortcut which isn't appreciated by everyone..
So, a little bit more work could be made but that's not a bad first track.