[ral] Bienys

Gravel, tarmac, snow. Whatever the surface, you'll find it here.
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pantteri
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[ral] Bienys

Post by pantteri »

Minun ensimmäinen rata. käytän aina google kääntäjää :hide:
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My first course. I always use google translator :hide:
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Hint
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Re: [ral] Bienys

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The lap is recorded before the S/F line and I think you should move the starting line around the pits but before the 2nd curve. Also, the AIs get stuck in between the fences and the cliff after exiting the 3rd pit stall. Maybe you should make the pit lane a little longer. You should smooth the cliffs at the edges of the track a little bit because I occasionally have a hard time getting on the track after falling off. I liked that you kept the layout small and simple for your first track, though. :bg:
pantteri
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Re: [ral] Bienys

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En muokkaa rataa paremmaksi mutta yritän ottaa sen huomioon seuraavissa tracks
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I do not edit the track better, but I try to take it into account in the following tracks





I apologize for bad English :doh:
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Very good track. Layout is good. Hills above track are great. Cliffs are to steep and pit lane is too short. 4/5
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Re: [ral] Bienys

Post by MattyG »

:iagree: with cocney about the the pits being way too short, other then that not a bad looking first track :)

good job :up:
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