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[ovl] Jybonn

Posted: Tue Sep 20, 2011 12:48 pm
by Emil Patanen
Here's my newest track, which is a "Go left, turn fast -ring" ;) It's a small oval located near countryside. The infield area isn't very usual for an oval track.

Re: [ovl] Jybonn

Posted: Tue Sep 20, 2011 1:19 pm
by cocney
I like it alot. Railroad is great and field in top left too.

Re: [ovl] Jybonn

Posted: Tue Sep 20, 2011 3:12 pm
by Bel
I really enjoy this kind of Oval, way better than rwl oval representations, it's funny to race like this!

I enjoy it, both visually and layout-wise

Very good effort and a keeper for me

Cheers

Re: [ovl] Jybonn

Posted: Tue Sep 20, 2011 4:24 pm
by Genetleman
Very nice dithering and the 3d of the railroad track is cool

* downloading *

Re: [ovl] Jybonn

Posted: Tue Sep 20, 2011 5:25 pm
by DuklaLiberec
Nice and good work, HJ. :bsmile:

Re: [ovl] Jybonn

Posted: Wed Sep 21, 2011 12:54 am
by MattyG
Great work as always HJ, most or all of your tracks have the most detailed areas ;)

Re: [ovl] Jybonn

Posted: Wed Sep 21, 2011 6:26 pm
by Emil Patanen
Thanks a lot for your comments, cocney, Bel, Genetleman, Bob Barker and MattyG :bsmile:

Re: [ovl] Jybonn

Posted: Thu Sep 22, 2011 7:48 pm
by XYY
So, I'll comment on this one.
I very like the object details left and right to the oval, as well as the "experimental" infield area.
I don't like so much the field in left - with all that yellow it looks unnatural to me. Also I don't really like the fact that parts of the pits are hidden in booths/walls. On rwl tracks where there's not much space I even make it like this myself, but I think that you could solve this issue easily.
And about the railroad: It looks good but it's too wide. I don't know what you consider as a train's width but with all cars I tested the wheels are even far away from the tarmac. :D
Anyway, keep the good work up :bg:

Re: [ovl] Jybonn

Posted: Thu Sep 22, 2011 8:08 pm
by Areen
Top quality job! :bg:

Re: [ovl] Jybonn

Posted: Sat Oct 01, 2011 11:45 am
by Trigger Happy
Perfect, it's great fun. :rocks:

BTW it's a reason, why always was sad, that Aleksi/Darjo didn't do few ovals while saying driving there is boring. Nt true, it's just bigger challenge for trackmaker to come with solution. :goodvibes: