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[ovl] Jybonn
Posted: Tue Sep 20, 2011 12:48 pm
by Emil Patanen
Here's my newest track, which is a "Go left, turn fast -ring"
It's a small oval located near countryside. The infield area isn't very usual for an oval track.
Re: [ovl] Jybonn
Posted: Tue Sep 20, 2011 1:19 pm
by cocney
I like it alot. Railroad is great and field in top left too.
Re: [ovl] Jybonn
Posted: Tue Sep 20, 2011 3:12 pm
by Bel
I really enjoy this kind of Oval, way better than rwl oval representations, it's funny to race like this!
I enjoy it, both visually and layout-wise
Very good effort and a keeper for me
Cheers
Re: [ovl] Jybonn
Posted: Tue Sep 20, 2011 4:24 pm
by Genetleman
Very nice dithering and the 3d of the railroad track is cool
* downloading *
Re: [ovl] Jybonn
Posted: Tue Sep 20, 2011 5:25 pm
by DuklaLiberec
Nice and good work, HJ.
Re: [ovl] Jybonn
Posted: Wed Sep 21, 2011 12:54 am
by MattyG
Great work as always HJ, most or all of your tracks have the most detailed areas
Re: [ovl] Jybonn
Posted: Wed Sep 21, 2011 6:26 pm
by Emil Patanen
Thanks a lot for your comments, cocney, Bel, Genetleman, Bob Barker and MattyG
Re: [ovl] Jybonn
Posted: Thu Sep 22, 2011 7:48 pm
by XYY
So, I'll comment on this one.
I very like the object details left and right to the oval, as well as the "experimental" infield area.
I don't like so much the field in left - with all that yellow it looks unnatural to me. Also I don't really like the fact that parts of the pits are hidden in booths/walls. On rwl tracks where there's not much space I even make it like this myself, but I think that you could solve this issue easily.
And about the railroad: It looks good but it's too wide. I don't know what you consider as a train's width but with all cars I tested the wheels are even far away from the tarmac.
Anyway, keep the good work up
Re: [ovl] Jybonn
Posted: Thu Sep 22, 2011 8:08 pm
by Areen
Top quality job!
Re: [ovl] Jybonn
Posted: Sat Oct 01, 2011 11:45 am
by Trigger Happy
Perfect, it's great fun.
BTW it's a reason, why always was sad, that Aleksi/Darjo didn't do few ovals while saying driving there is boring. Nt true, it's just bigger challenge for trackmaker to come with solution.