[cir] Opdicus Park

[egamad]

My second serious circuit I'm releasing (the first was Lawrey Park if anyone still remembers it ):


Opdicus Park


Two years ago the archeologists discovered Opdicus Park, for which they have reasonable grounds to believe the Mayans have built. Not only that, but they found edible hot dogs in the fridge too.

There are 2 versions of the track, the original long version (L), and a short version (S). Like I said, only my second circuit, so constructive criticism greatly appreciated.

I also have to thank AleksiNir for making the kerbs and improving the AI line. So, thank you.

[thegreatfalcon]

The Bads
1. I don't know... looks strange to me... EDIT: The concrete walls in diagonal are dangerous! :O
2. Not the same width than other parts of the track.. looks and feel weird.
3. A door leading... under the tarmac???
4. The lines are not parallel
5. Looking like if the width was changing here...

The Goods
A. Well made, I like the textures
B. Same than A.

Please, come back to rally! Good work although of those little things... Layout is great

[Lukeno94]

1. They aren't THAT dangerous really.
2. It is actually the same width, near enough, but it does look weird.
3. Door leading under the tarmac? How else would he get to his house?
4. Fair comment, I agree with that one.
5. It is the same width, just blurring the margins a bit.

[egamad]

Thanks for taking the time to comment, TGF!

1. I actually had no idea what to fill the space with, so I agree.
2. I think the road is equally wide throughout the track, it's just visual because of the yellow line. And the line is there because the wall is dangerously close to the track.
3. Yes, a very SPECIAL door..
4. They might be off for a pixel or two. Don't split hairs.
5. Again danger because of the bridge, so the track goes off the original racing tarmac, which is cleverly concealed by, again, yellow line!

A and B: thank you.

And yes, I will do rally again, I just had to get this one out on the open, it's been eating away my HD space..


EDIT: Thanks Luke, for letting everyone know where I live. No, no, thanks, really. Sheesh.

[GeneSuomi]

If you hit the wall of the last bridge you will fly into grand stand and kill the whole crowd Isn't it a bit dangerous

[egamad]

If you hit the wall of the last bridge you will fly into grand stand and kill the whole crowd Isn't it a bit dangerous

Each spectator enters the grandstand at their own risk, it's all written in the fine print.

[GeneSuomi]

If you hit the wall of the last bridge you will fly into grand stand and kill the whole crowd Isn't it a bit dangerous

Each spectator enters the grandstand at their own risk, it's all written in the fine print.

And then they wonder "How did you the tickets so cheap?"