[cir] [ral] VRing

Gravel, tarmac, snow. Whatever the surface, you'll find it here.
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LegoDino77
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[cir] [ral] VRing

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Yeah, my first track is VRing and I think to upload it in here, but remember! This is my FIRST track ever done, so tell me what I should to do better, and what Ive done nicely, Thank you ;D
This track is a crash track, not so hardcore but just for fun.
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Re: [cir] [ral] VRing

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The track looks okay, but IMO it is somewhat empty and too plain, thus the scenery is not that interesting. For instance, you could have added more spectators and/or other objects on the asphalt squares. The spreading of the gravel is a bit too onesided and placing grass behind the barriers and the stands looks... odd for me.
The track layout is fine and it's fun to have the AI bumping and crashing to each other. I am surprised howver why you put the pit crew on mud :eyes: :D

All in all, 3/5 :star: :star: :star: :exstar: :exstar:
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Re: [cir] [ral] VRing

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DuklaLiberec wrote:The track looks okay, but IMO it is somewhat empty and too plain
Yeah, I know, the track is not beautiful, and this was alot of testing, but what IMO means ;D!? Is it like background, look or something ;D?
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Re: [cir] [ral] VRing

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Welcome to the english forum language my friend, IMO = In my opinion :P
BTW = By the way
AFAIK = As far as i know
WTF = What the f...
AFAIR = As far as i remember...

there are some others acronyms used here that i dont remember right now, anyway, you could just UTFG! :P

PS: UTFG = Use the f... Google
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