[cir] Kazanring

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[cir] Kazanring

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Hello! :)

I want introduce my new test track for the Caterham team. It lies in the Sermon on the edge of the forest. It's very fast and simple. I hope for forward to comments and advice. Enjoy!
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It looks really good. I will download it, and then I can give a better opinion.

EDIT: It's a good track indeed. I didn't like, however, the inside wall on turn 1.
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It's not the best track I've ever seen, but definitely not the worst. The track should probably have some more run-offs as it's test track. Plus it's a bit too squarish for my taste.

And one more thing, Kazanring is the real name of a real track. And it may confuse other people. Try to give fictional names to fictional tracks. ;)
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Hmmm ... Buka I agree, I think this track is something missing, but I do not know what. Anyway, the track is ok: D
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One of planned pit crew missing, plus they are so tight (and the pit lane in sum), that it doesn't work for racing. :(

Fun factor of layout is unfortunately quite average, hmap as interesting as the breast of a Chinese Olympic gold medallist in lady gymnastics, concrete walls very close to kerbs both outside and inside curves don't help either.

Very careful and detail work on lmap and deserves a thumb up. :up: Please, focus more on gameplay in next tracks too and your tracks will be amazing. :)
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Thanks for all the comments and advice, I will take it to heart, and will use the next track. :D
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Trigger Happy wrote:hmap as interesting as the breast of a Chinese Olympic gold medallist in lady gymnastics
Comment of the year! Have to agree with all the comments above, it's all a bit sparse, layout isn't bad but doesn't work with the surroundings you've chosen. Also reminds me of lukeno94's Ackland. But keep it up, the next one will be better!
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I'm pretty sure that's not the most appropriate comment in the history of the world Ivo... as amusing as it may be. :rofl: I've got nothing to say that hasn't been said before, but it's a reasonable track.
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I enjoy the style of the track, but I think the rotation is unnecessary as it just makes everything look smaller like if it had a world size of 200+ which is out of my comfort zone. This one's not a keeper, but I'm looking forward to your future releases. :bg:
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