[cir] Ingleburn

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Ingleburn

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My newest track :)


Edit: tags corrected by Trigger Happy.
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It looks very good but I would like to download it too :scratch:
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I was improve checkpoints because I forgot they :P

It's all right now :)
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All right :bg: but what I do for rar.s?
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Right key and open (?) ;)
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GeneSuomi wrote:All right :bg: but what I do for rar.s?
Open with winRAR.

Btw .rars are not allowed around here, use .zip.
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I would like to know why .rars not allowed?

7Zip can open all.. or i'm wrong?
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Rars are allowed. 7zip not allowed - Rules (in article 3).
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Upss sorry :sweatdrop:
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On your side is everything correct, Tilt (with exemption of your signature btw). ;)
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Ohh.. right I forgot about signature ;) Sorry. I change this :) I was have problems with my computer and sig. are not inscribed.
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Thanks for the zip :goodvibes: About the track,
-Layout is nice, Silverstone spirit for me,
-I think that the first offise block blocks too much.
- Pit lane is perfect for cheating :sweatdrop:
- I don't like those red-yellow lines
-dithering is nice

So, good job
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what the! those red and yellow lines werent there on this mornings screenshot??? although i havent tested yet, they dont look good, rest of the track looks good on first impressions though :bg:
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Nice realistic looking fictional circuit.. wait what? Those lines :really: ?
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I must agree about those lines. Is like in Halama's Bahrain btw. But I would like to metion another point - the walls around several straights are unnecessary far way from the tarmac, if they would be closer, you would have much more place for more objects - typical s/f line, where could be a grandstand opposite to paddock. There is too much gaps in the walls in some places, e.g. third straight has on internal side of track so much ways between track and marshal's roads, that the short sections of wall are not making nice impression. With one gap less it would look much more cool. ;) And you placed quite dangerously a short wall on external side of second straight to a place, where should be rather a small safety area for cars colliding in 1st curve. Or you built an office block directly opposite to stand (near medical heliport), so it blocks view on track for spectators. There are much better places for office block inside the huge infield of track or I can recommend to make the office block lower.

4/5 :bg:

BTW please remember, Tilt, that this is not track pack. Track pack = a pack with several tracks inside, not only one track. I edited the tag this time for you, but next time read better the Handbook for uploading of tracks.
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Ingleburn v. 2.6
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Thanks Ivo for advices :) I have to improve Conrete Walls ;) Within three days I will give version 2.5 :)
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Changes in Ingleburn seen in previous post. Please comment! :hiya:
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I'm not sure, if the double drawn chicane is good idea. If the original chicane not worked well and you're not able to remake it, I recommend to replace it simply by single right bend instead of it. ;) The changes in infield are 100% positive. :bg:
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i agree with ivo, a fast right, long, ever so slightly banked corner rather than that chicane would be better for a 2nd version!

and those lines :doh:

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What do you think?
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That's good :bg:
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ah thats better, although if i had those seats in the stands in the bottom left, id want my money back :D otherwise much better!

only other thing that ive noticed all along, the walls along the track side, its noticable on the start finish straight, that you in theory can hit the wall ends, and it should be safer, see my pic
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