Amazon Tro

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Wojtek
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Amazon Tro

Post by Wojtek »

Hello !

I want to presentation my first track on gr.com
I hope you`ll enjoy it :goal:
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Lukeno94
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Your track looks very good, although rather too wide, but please add track tags from here :)
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cocney
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I think that first runnoff could be wide. For the first track it looks promising. Welcome to forum :bg: !
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Von Mantov
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Re: Amazon Tro

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a good work!...very good the objects placement

my hints are:

- next time adjust the world size or the imap objects...the car in the center behind the pit are too big...
-try to texturize the road ..

glad to have you amongst us :welcome:
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Garbre
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Re: Amazon Tro

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Welcome to the forum, Wojtek! :wave:

It's a decent track for a first one! It's a very fast track, but some players may find it too wide, although not me(it's subjective anyway). You could have used bigger variety of objects, but the crowd looks really good. I ecspecially like the corner in the upper left area! :yummy: Though I don't understand the point of placing so many persons in the woods. Why aren't they using the empty roads? Last two thing I should mention that the sunk tyres in the pit entrance are just as dangerous as the concrete walls in the pit exit. Bigger cars may have difficulties exiting there. Aside from these I like the heightmap's design and the Ai is great! The track's clean and neat, reminds me of Glen's style of trackmaking! Keep up the good work! :bg:
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