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Bekk · Post by **Bekk** » Sat Mar 13, 2010 9:48 pm

Hello all, I'm new here, and I bring a track made by me (obviously), and I hope you like it. It's my first track, then, is there some kind of error on the track, please tell me what is wrong to not happen again.

Hope you enjoy, thanks!!

scook120 · Post by **scook120** » Sun Mar 14, 2010 1:26 am

That looks very good for your first attempt at a track.

thegreatfalcon · Post by **thegreatfalcon** » Sun Mar 14, 2010 2:10 am

scook120 wrote:That looks very good for your first attempt at a track.

That looks very good for your first attempt at a comment.

I agree that it's good for a first track

GeneSuomi · Post by **GeneSuomi** » Sun Mar 14, 2010 7:37 am

I have a problem with that zip. It looks empty when I try to unzip it

Post by **XYY** » Sun Mar 14, 2010 10:01 am

I had no Problem with it..
should I send you?

thegreatfalcon · Post by **thegreatfalcon** » Sun Mar 14, 2010 10:04 am

GeneSuomi wrote:I have a problem with that zip. It looks empty when I try to unzip it

It was maybe packed with a non-standard compression method... Using WinRar or 7Zip will handle that problem

Post by **XYY** » Sun Mar 14, 2010 10:05 am

using 7zip I could unzip it without any problems...

GeneSuomi · Post by **GeneSuomi** » Sun Mar 14, 2010 10:16 am

XYY wrote: should I send you?

Well... it would be nice

Post by **XYY** » Sun Mar 14, 2010 10:20 am

You should recieve a mail about now

GeneSuomi · Post by **GeneSuomi** » Sun Mar 14, 2010 10:25 am

Thanks (or danke)

Let's say something about the track
-Layout is nice
-colors nice (blue/green)
-Maybe it is a bit too wide

-Sunk tyres in safe areas are useless and look strange

But i like it

thegreatfalcon · Post by **thegreatfalcon** » Sun Mar 14, 2010 10:30 am

I agree with GeneSuomi: My main comment is that the track is WAY too width... It's about 4 cars width...
The layout is also a bit imprecise... You could have used SnakeEditor to make top notch layout...

Even though, not bad. I don't actually said "Good job for a first track" since it's way over the quality of usual first tracks...

EDIT: Some other improvements that could be done:
-putting trees or something in the actually empty areas mostly in bottom right, middle and middle left...
-Making more careful forest: Put about 2 bushes for a tree... Looks better I think... Putting less trees is important

Bekk · Post by **Bekk** » Sun Mar 14, 2010 2:51 pm

Thanks all and thanks for the tips GeneSuomi!

For the next track, I hope not contain more errors

Haruna · Post by **Haruna** » Sun Mar 14, 2010 4:46 pm

I have no real complaints other than that oil is used as a pitlane surface, which doesn't mix well with most users' cars.

Post by **The lost Ninja** » Mon Mar 15, 2010 6:30 am

Do I see a new upcoming trackmaster here?
For a first track, this is very good, compared with other's first ones! (And my own first crappy track).
Nice layout, maybe you should place the kerbs a bit more accurate?

Anyway, great job.

Bekk · Post by **Bekk** » Mon Mar 15, 2010 8:33 pm

Thxx Lost Ninja, eer... my kerb are not good, because I did this track in Paint ... I do not know still messing with the SnakeEditor and I do not have PhotoShop ... but I'm beginning to learn the SnakeEditor ...

It is difficult to make tracks, for me, just need a LOT of patience.

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