[cir] Japery
[cir] Japery
Hello all, I'm new here, and I bring a track made by me (obviously), and I hope you like it. It's my first track, then, is there some kind of error on the track, please tell me what is wrong to not happen again.
Hope you enjoy, thanks!!
Hope you enjoy, thanks!!
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Sorry for my english.
Re: [cir] Japery
That looks very good for your first attempt at a track.
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That looks very good for your first attempt at a comment.scook120 wrote:That looks very good for your first attempt at a track.
I agree that it's good for a first track
Re: [cir] Japery
I have a problem with that zip. It looks empty when I try to unzip it
And the story was whatever was the song what it was
Re: [cir] Japery
I had no Problem with it..
should I send you?
should I send you?
My e-mail-address:xyyverwaltung@googlemail.com
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Re: [cir] Japery
It was maybe packed with a non-standard compression method... Using WinRar or 7Zip will handle that problemGeneSuomi wrote:I have a problem with that zip. It looks empty when I try to unzip it
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using 7zip I could unzip it without any problems...
My e-mail-address:xyyverwaltung@googlemail.com
Last track: Meadowdale Raceways - Last car: Ford Falcon GTHO Phase III
All of my tracks
Last track: Meadowdale Raceways - Last car: Ford Falcon GTHO Phase III
All of my tracks
Re: [cir] Japery
Well... it would be niceXYY wrote: should I send you?
And the story was whatever was the song what it was
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You should recieve a mail about now
My e-mail-address:xyyverwaltung@googlemail.com
Last track: Meadowdale Raceways - Last car: Ford Falcon GTHO Phase III
All of my tracks
Last track: Meadowdale Raceways - Last car: Ford Falcon GTHO Phase III
All of my tracks
Re: [cir] Japery
Thanks (or danke)
Let's say something about the track
-Layout is nice
-colors nice (blue/green)
-Maybe it is a bit too wide
-Sunk tyres in safe areas are useless and look strange
But i like it
Let's say something about the track
-Layout is nice
-colors nice (blue/green)
-Maybe it is a bit too wide
-Sunk tyres in safe areas are useless and look strange
But i like it
And the story was whatever was the song what it was
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Re: [cir] Japery
I agree with GeneSuomi: My main comment is that the track is WAY too width... It's about 4 cars width...
The layout is also a bit imprecise... You could have used SnakeEditor to make top notch layout...
Even though, not bad. I don't actually said "Good job for a first track" since it's way over the quality of usual first tracks...
EDIT: Some other improvements that could be done:
-putting trees or something in the actually empty areas mostly in bottom right, middle and middle left...
-Making more careful forest: Put about 2 bushes for a tree... Looks better I think... Putting less trees is important
The layout is also a bit imprecise... You could have used SnakeEditor to make top notch layout...
Even though, not bad. I don't actually said "Good job for a first track" since it's way over the quality of usual first tracks...
EDIT: Some other improvements that could be done:
-putting trees or something in the actually empty areas mostly in bottom right, middle and middle left...
-Making more careful forest: Put about 2 bushes for a tree... Looks better I think... Putting less trees is important
Re: [cir] Japery
Thanks all and thanks for the tips GeneSuomi!
For the next track, I hope not contain more errors
For the next track, I hope not contain more errors
Sorry for my english.
Re: [cir] Japery
I have no real complaints other than that oil is used as a pitlane surface, which doesn't mix well with most users' cars.
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Re: [cir] Japery
Do I see a new upcoming trackmaster here?
For a first track, this is very good, compared with other's first ones! (And my own first crappy track).
Nice layout, maybe you should place the kerbs a bit more accurate?
Anyway, great job.
For a first track, this is very good, compared with other's first ones! (And my own first crappy track).
Nice layout, maybe you should place the kerbs a bit more accurate?
Anyway, great job.
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Thxx Lost Ninja, eer... my kerb are not good, because I did this track in Paint ... I do not know still messing with the SnakeEditor and I do not have PhotoShop ... but I'm beginning to learn the SnakeEditor ...
It is difficult to make tracks, for me, just need a LOT of patience.
It is difficult to make tracks, for me, just need a LOT of patience.
Sorry for my english.