[cir] Soemihi Motorpark

Gravel, tarmac, snow. Whatever the surface, you'll find it here.
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[cir] Soemihi Motorpark

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Hello! :wave:
I present you my new track: Soemihi Motorpark!
Please comment :)!

(Edit: correct AI Pit line on short version, correct PoV)
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Re: [cir] Soemihi Motorpark

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Adjust and zoom in the PoV more towards the circuit itself, since it shows a bit too much the space beyond the map. Though the atmosphere is reasonably good, the residential area including its roads at the bottom right does not really go well with the whole track. Furthermore, during my AI test observations, I realized that the AI behaviour in the pit lane is more or less messy - when they head for the pits first, they crash into the edge of the pit wall, and then drive to the pits whilst still 'gluing' on the walls.

Anyhow, another reasonable track with a nice layout from you, keep it up. :bg:
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Thanks Dukla for comment!
Anybody else?
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I think it´s a very nice track. Especially considering that you´re pretty new to trackmaking.
There are just some minor (but important) things that make the difference between an all right track and a great track.
Like some more detailed scenery or dittering.

To be honest I can´t tell you exactly what to improve...
But keep making tracks and you will get better and better each time. :bg:
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Thanks Scholl for support!
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I don't really have anything new to add to the commentary, I'd just back Dukla up at what he said - the biggest turn-off for me is how the track itself feels distant. Break up the forest with some hmap/lmap/object details and you get a very decent track. :)

Other than that I can only give you thumbs up for your future tracks! :up:
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Thanks egamad! I get more and more support! That gives me wings :)
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