View unanswered posts | View active topics It is currently Tue Jun 02, 2020 7:13 am



Reply to topic  [ 15 posts ] • Topic rating: Ratings: 5, 4.60 on the average.Ratings: 5, 4.60 on the average.Ratings: 5, 4.60 on the average.Ratings: 5, 4.60 on the average.Ratings: 5, 4.60 on the average. 
 [cir] Circuit of Thomas Bata v2.0 
Author Message
User avatar


Joined: Fri Sep 14, 2012 6:57 pm
Posts: 1577
Location: Czech Republic
Post [cir] Circuit of Thomas Bata v2.0
EDIT: SCROLL DOWN FOR NEW VERSION!

cheerleader: NEW TRACK cheerleader:

I would like to present you my :greybeard: work. I am working on it since 11/2012 and long way comes to the end.
This is fictional track placed on real world city. It's called Okruh Tomáše Bati (circuit of Thomas Bata ). It was inspired by several tracks. Austin, Paul Ricard, Yeongam, Suzuka, Barcelona. I thing, that is all. There are two layouts. GP, and F. One with and one without slowdown chicane. AI line was tested by newest F1 car pack by XYY.(sorry Gzehoo, but you release it too late).
What to say more? I hope, that you will not hate red line, you will not hate Austin curve, and you will not like it. So download it, try it, give a feedback, give a feedback, and give a feedback.

PS: I hope, that url will work :rofl:


Attachments:
Circuit of Thomas Bata.rar [74.37 KiB]
Downloaded 188 times
Circuit of Thomas Bata.JPG
Circuit of Thomas Bata.JPG [ 109.95 KiB | Viewed 2819 times ]

_________________
3 times pole-sitter in GRPL F2. Future GRPL F2 race winner.
(last edit: 23/04/2020)


Last edited by FRUKIScze on Thu Oct 25, 2018 11:54 am, edited 4 times in total.

Sun Mar 31, 2013 8:57 pm
Profile E-mail ICQ WWW
User avatar


Joined: Thu Aug 16, 2012 6:54 pm
Posts: 774
Location: Poland
Post Re: [cir] Circuit of Thomas Bata
OK, fast reply. Layout good, but in top middle is.. Is only trees (and highway)! There would be quite huge part of track. Btw, 2nd attention: on 3rd turn, return, this altitude is.. bad. Better would be, if this altitude would brake up on straight.
However, not bad, but please correct this adjust on return :)

_________________
Trackmaker who came back for couple of unfinished projects.
Last track: Dustland 2020
Upcoming track progress: ~60%
My tracks


Sun Mar 31, 2013 9:27 pm
Profile E-mail
User avatar


Joined: Thu Jul 07, 2011 1:14 pm
Posts: 815
Location: Croatia
Post Re: [cir] Circuit of Thomas Bata
For me, there is way too much space between pits and start positions. 3rd turn is bad (hmap), too many trees fill free spaces...
Also, I don't like colour of the kerbs. I would pick white/green or white/brown.

_________________
I am the master of my fate:
I am the captain of my soul.


Mon Apr 01, 2013 7:40 am
Profile E-mail
User avatar


Joined: Wed Jun 29, 2011 1:54 pm
Posts: 1853
Location: Germany
Post Re: [cir] Circuit of Thomas Bata
At the first glance, it is pretty obvious that this circuit is inspired by Tilkedromes. It did not surprise me that it is not everyone's cup of tea, since it resembles a so-called 'Tilkedrome'.   ;)
Scenery-wise, I am not really fond of the row of stands placed parallel to the start/finish line. Speaking of stands, focus the arrangement more on the infield (circuits lacking of stands in the infield is a rather atypical characteristic of Tilkedromes) 
I am not a fan of the layout, either, and the woods filling the infield and the remaining space looks quite boring imho, I like the idea of the road/motorway leading underneath the track itself and parts of the forest, though. 
In overall, your track is quite okay essentially, there are some spots in need of improvement, otherwise it is a fair 3.75/5. :star:

_________________
One does not make somebody feel obliged to comment immediately in every topic.


Mon Apr 01, 2013 9:57 am
Profile WWW
User avatar


Joined: Fri Sep 14, 2012 6:57 pm
Posts: 1577
Location: Czech Republic
Post Re: [cir] Circuit of Thomas Bata v2.0
Sorry for late answer, but i was working(not alone) on big answer.
DuklaLiberec wrote:
there are some spots in need of improvement
So. I wanted to do sequel of this track, but i don't know, what to do with this
DuklaLiberec wrote:
the wood filling the infield and the reminding space looks boring imho
But then,
YoNnie wrote:
I have idea, how to fill that boring forest places
So. I gave him permision, and the big answer is here.
Attachment:
File comment: tram ta da daaa
Bata GP.PNG
Bata GP.PNG [ 755.22 KiB | Viewed 2618 times ]

There are 4 layouts
- Bata GP - New layout
- Bata Int - Old layout
- Bata M - Motorcycle layout
- Bata Nat - Sprint Strecke
So. What to say more?
Very big Thanks to YoNnie, which made sequel and i just made layouts, and FTs.
Download this
Attachment:
Okruh Tomaše Bati v2.0.rar [159.54 KiB]
Downloaded 131 times
and have fun

_________________
3 times pole-sitter in GRPL F2. Future GRPL F2 race winner.
(last edit: 23/04/2020)


Sun Apr 28, 2013 4:08 pm
Profile E-mail ICQ WWW
User avatar


Joined: Wed Jun 29, 2011 1:54 pm
Posts: 1853
Location: Germany
Post Re: [cir] Circuit of Thomas Bata
That looks slightly better, despite the Mickey Mouse-ish layout which is not my cup of tea. (this was the case in the previous version of the circuit, too)

_________________
One does not make somebody feel obliged to comment immediately in every topic.


Sun Apr 28, 2013 4:33 pm
Profile WWW
User avatar


Joined: Sun Jul 10, 2011 10:58 am
Posts: 73
Post Re: [cir] Circuit of Thomas Bata
This is really a star of a race track, jet! Respekt and 5/5 stars! Very well done!!


Sun Apr 28, 2013 6:13 pm
Profile E-mail
User avatar


Joined: Thu Aug 16, 2012 6:54 pm
Posts: 774
Location: Poland
Post Re: [cir] Circuit of Thomas Bata
Thanks Dukla and happy (not mine topic, but in some part my track :D)!

_________________
Trackmaker who came back for couple of unfinished projects.
Last track: Dustland 2020
Upcoming track progress: ~60%
My tracks


Sun Apr 28, 2013 7:07 pm
Profile E-mail
User avatar


Joined: Fri Sep 14, 2012 6:57 pm
Posts: 1577
Location: Czech Republic
Post Re: [cir] Circuit of Thomas Bata
YoNnie wrote:
Thanks Dukla and happy (not mine topic, but in some part my track :D)!
You are allowed to write here this posts :bg: :rofl:
btw. I have to say (write) thank you too.

_________________
3 times pole-sitter in GRPL F2. Future GRPL F2 race winner.
(last edit: 23/04/2020)


Sun Apr 28, 2013 7:26 pm
Profile E-mail ICQ WWW
User avatar


Joined: Thu Aug 16, 2012 6:54 pm
Posts: 774
Location: Poland
Post Re: [cir] Circuit of Thomas Bata
My pleasure, FRUKIS :D

_________________
Trackmaker who came back for couple of unfinished projects.
Last track: Dustland 2020
Upcoming track progress: ~60%
My tracks


Mon Apr 29, 2013 4:51 pm
Profile E-mail
User avatar


Joined: Fri Sep 14, 2012 6:57 pm
Posts: 1577
Location: Czech Republic
Post Re: [cir] Circuit of Thomas Bata
Any other comments will be welcome. :bg:

_________________
3 times pole-sitter in GRPL F2. Future GRPL F2 race winner.
(last edit: 23/04/2020)


Mon Apr 29, 2013 4:59 pm
Profile E-mail ICQ WWW
Online
User avatar


Joined: Thu Aug 09, 2012 8:02 am
Posts: 299
Location: France
Post Re: [cir] Circuit of Thomas Bata v2.0
If you want ! :)

The first time I saw your track (the first version), I was very surprised of these beautiful red/blue lines of your tracks ! It's very appealing !
Your improved track is way better than the first, especially with the addition of layouts and the fix of the altitude in the last corner (if my memory's right, which is not always the case...).
I didn't race on it, but I think you make all the AI lines and checkpoints well, so good job to both of you FRUKIScze and YoNnie ! :bg:

_________________


Tue Apr 30, 2013 8:25 am
Profile E-mail
User avatar


Joined: Fri Sep 14, 2012 6:57 pm
Posts: 1577
Location: Czech Republic
Post Re: [cir] Circuit of Thomas Bata v2.0
Thanks Kikwik.

Yes. These lines are very hard to make (i mean, that this take a lot of time). And AI-line was tested with PGRF1 cars.
Maybe one little comment? (comments like "great track!" or "good track" are welcome)

_________________
3 times pole-sitter in GRPL F2. Future GRPL F2 race winner.
(last edit: 23/04/2020)


Tue Apr 30, 2013 11:38 am
Profile E-mail ICQ WWW
User avatar


Joined: Thu Aug 16, 2012 6:54 pm
Posts: 774
Location: Poland
Post Re: [cir] Circuit of Thomas Bata v2.0
I must say this blue and red lines aren't difficult to do :D. It's just very boring and take many time :)

_________________
Trackmaker who came back for couple of unfinished projects.
Last track: Dustland 2020
Upcoming track progress: ~60%
My tracks


Tue Apr 30, 2013 5:10 pm
Profile E-mail
User avatar

GeneRally Trackmaster

Joined: Mon May 16, 2011 10:58 am
Posts: 551
Post Re: [cir] Circuit of Thomas Bata v2.0
I really like the track! Even if I´m not a big fan of WS 225 fictional circuits.
Very clean work on the Lmap. It´s obvious that you have spent a lot of time on it.
Maybe you could have been a bit more creative on the surroundings...


Wed May 01, 2013 10:53 am
Profile E-mail
Display posts from previous:  Sort by  
Reply to topic   [ 15 posts ] • Topic rating: Ratings: 5, 4.60 on the average.Ratings: 5, 4.60 on the average.Ratings: 5, 4.60 on the average.Ratings: 5, 4.60 on the average.Ratings: 5, 4.60 on the average. 

Who is online

Users browsing this forum: No registered users and 8 guests


You cannot post new topics in this forum
You cannot reply to topics in this forum
You cannot edit your posts in this forum
You cannot delete your posts in this forum
You cannot post attachments in this forum

Search for:
Jump to:  
Powered by phpBB © 2000, 2002, 2005, 2007 phpBB Group.
Designed by STSoftware for PTF.