[cir] Abu Hail

Gravel, tarmac, snow. Whatever the surface, you'll find it here.
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AeroWiewiur
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[cir] Abu Hail

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My new track

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Wiewiur, layout is great! Desert/Arabian scenery is fine too..
But I think this tarmac looks.. boring. And you might add some people behind concrete walls, or stand.
But track looks OK, and I repeat layout is very very cool!
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Great layout. Scenery too. I would add some sand runoffs because these are too boring.
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Re: [cir] Abu Hail

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Great desert texture, but bit empty. Maybe more hmap dunes and some cliffs? Also some palm alley around a straight or paths or one more stand (infield has many, outside is only two stands and one path) would help. Similarly the bay is OK, but could be better (a pier, docks or a natural coastline partly?). And one more detail about Lmap, some lines white aren't very nice, because are doubled here and there (s/f straight), when you finish work in SnakeDitor, don't forget to check and clean the mess before continuing on following details (like dithering).

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