[cir] [stc] Comendore Speedway

Gravel, tarmac, snow. Whatever the surface, you'll find it here.
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[cir] [stc] Comendore Speedway

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After my Fail on my first tracks (Yeah, first time i made a track) i decided to Use snakeDitor Instead. I made a speedway called Comendore Speedway.
This MIGHT be my first successful Track, Just because there are no rugged edges. (except for the pit exit, i had to change the layout of the pit) But overall, i think i did pretty well. this will be my first track done on SnakeDitor.

Feel free to comment, but dont be rude please.
You can comment a [Polite] Review Demonstrating the weaknesses and strengths of this track.

EDIT: Just a heads up, Since the name is too long, the generally program changed it to COMEND~1

UPDATE!
-Changed world size
-changed camera angle to birds eye view
-reworked AI
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Re: Comendore Speedway

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It looks awfully narrow for the most part, and also important parts of the track are blocked from view by office blocks in the upper right hand corner, making it appear to be almost undrivable because of the lack of view there. Also, I'd recommend taking a little time in paint to do some work, like squaring off the left end of the pit road-it looks weird rounded off like that. And a little dithering/lmap work would make this track look even better. I might also recommend that you only use 5 sets of pitmen instead of 6, since 6 seems to be one too many for your pits. On the plus side, the multi-colored track border does look kind of cool :bg: And I've certainly seen worse tracks posted on here. Keep up the good work.
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Re: Comendore Speedway

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ok, i gonna try to Make a birds eye view so it can be drivable
EDIT: Track has been updated. Look at the Top Page on Page 1.
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