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david999 · Post by **david999** » Tue Feb 25, 2014 4:30 pm

Another track made by me. I want to make a track in a "downtown" area with some green places.

I tried to improve myself - so comment it, please.

Hi,

YoNnie · Post by **YoNnie** » Tue Feb 25, 2014 5:24 pm

Very nice! Simple track, colorful, with nice scenery, and overall very nice! I think only one thing you have to improve is the dithering - but don't understand me wrong, I only want to show you "the way" where you would be better.
If I remember good, I wrote yoy about making the dithering - and you took the lesson. Now, you can take not only the spray, try also make dithering with pencil and straight lines - it will be looking more realisticly and overall better.
I can't say you learnt everything only without the dithering, I know it by myself - I think I gained "level" up but still I have something to improve. So try make tracks better and better in every you work. At this time it's very good track and I'm waiting for more

Post by **XYY** » Tue Feb 25, 2014 7:13 pm

David999, please don't forget to put a space between the track tags, otherwise it won't be found by the search engine!

RobertRacer · Post by **RobertRacer** » Tue Feb 25, 2014 7:24 pm

This track is very good. In the background of the track is the track not very good to see, but it is still good, even if it is very short.

3,8/5 + nomination for ToM Feb' 14

david999 · Post by **david999** » Tue Feb 25, 2014 7:48 pm

Yonnie: thanks for the advices.

I felt the track lacks something, and i knew the track surface is too simply. Now i know what i need to do at next time.

XYY: the problem was solved, thx for warning.
Robertracer99: sry for the background, i dont knew what i can do with the small place there. :/

Thanks for the feedbacks for all !

NicolasP · Post by **NicolasP** » Tue Feb 25, 2014 8:28 pm

david999, this track reminds me to Puerto Montt, Chile. a street with downtown, various green areas and sea, see my comparision, i gave a 4,5

david999 · Post by **david999** » Tue Feb 25, 2014 8:40 pm

Np2003 wrote:david999, this track reminds me to Puerto Montt, Chile. a street with downtown, various green areas and sea, see my comparision, i gave a 4,5

Hm.. Interesting comparision.

I've never heard about this place... Thanks for reply !

Piet · Post by **Piet** » Tue Feb 25, 2014 10:13 pm

Nice little track! I like these kind of small tracks because they make the Generally physics come forward.
Only thing was that the AI could be a little bit faster in my opinion. But anyway...

The Grimeloid · Post by **The Grimeloid** » Thu Feb 27, 2014 10:52 pm

As Nappa, from Dragon Ball Z Abridged, says: "IT'S... IT'S... IIIIIT'S SSSSOOO CUUUTE!"

david999 · Post by **david999** » Fri Feb 28, 2014 7:04 pm

Thanks for comments, guys ! If anyone can give tips what i need to improve at next time - say it !

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