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[cir] [rwl] Wunstorf Airfield Circuit

Posted: Sat Mar 15, 2014 9:12 pm
by NicolasP
Hi everyone, i make the wunstorf airfield circuit, hope you like :D.

Re: [cir] [rwl] Wunstorf Airfield Circuit

Posted: Sat Mar 15, 2014 9:36 pm
by YoNnie
I feel like you 've done nothing since post in W.I.P Thread. And this is.. not good. I think this is your best track, however you have some problems you have to correct:
1). Lmap objects - cars are to small, but are quite well made. Unfortunately ads have wrong perspective then it looks very bad. If you want to make it good, go (in the game) by the car to the ad and look how are ad lines and car lines. They must be parallel.
2). I see the crack in between wall - it's not the problem, it's oversight so make sure everything you placed is place well.
3). Lmap in all - lines on airstrip are askew, roads are ugly, fields too. Maybe I'm crude, but I want give you some tips at start, not after 10 - 15 track. When I started trackmaking my track was bad, really bad but I thought they are the best :P. Now I can see my mistakes and I know if I would have more tips in those days (and if I would listen better), I would be better earlier (but I'm not saing I'm the best, still I make something wrong for sure, but I correct it in each track).
BTW, say nothing of your problems it's nice track :) I see you did big progress, if you will do still this progress, you will be very good :)

Re: [cir] [rwl] Wunstorf Airfield Circuit

Posted: Sun Mar 16, 2014 9:26 am
by RobertRacer
Yes, that isn't very good. Still with Mrs. Puff's Boating School and Chamonix one of your best tracks. On the map you should add a few decoration objects, that the track looks better. But, why is there walls in the right runway? It's too narrow, that a car can drive through it. I say it it still :star: :star: :star: :exstar: :exstar:

You are better then at your first tracks. Tracks like Martinsville speedway and Grand Valley speedway would get by me only :star: :halfstar: :exstar: :exstar: :exstar: .

But when you like to make tracks, it is ok. Only this is important. ;) You should have fun with it.

Re: [cir] [rwl] Wunstorf Airfield Circuit

Posted: Sun Mar 16, 2014 6:57 pm
by masa
You make rapid and substantial progress in track-making. It surprises me! I think you win ToM in the near future. :winner: Np2003 won!
p.s. Are you really 10 years old? It's nice being young talent. (I'm so jealous.. :shy:) When I started playing GR, you were 2 years old baby still.. :greybeard:

Re: [cir] [rwl] Wunstorf Airfield Circuit

Posted: Sun Mar 16, 2014 7:27 pm
by NicolasP
Thanks MASA, i also believe have, at least one time win a ToM, and some question, in that month start to play GR in 2004, because i born in July 29 of 2003, and my trackmaking progress go of you, you is my teacher of trackmaking :D, and I am the only Chilean user in GRIF, in RSC forum were (I think only in compos) Bongo Bonzol, who was the best driver in, October 2004, Cristian, Jose Pedro and Warren T.

Re: [cir] [rwl] Wunstorf Airfield Circuit

Posted: Sun Mar 16, 2014 7:59 pm
by NicolasP
And MASA, I gave a idea from a thread from tracks from Gran Turismo, make for me and a help from you, you think of the idea, when you have time make the thread (if you could) :D.

Re: [cir] [rwl] Wunstorf Airfield Circuit

Posted: Sun Mar 16, 2014 10:00 pm
by The Grimeloid
Wait wait wait: NP is 10 years old? :o

I'm 19 and I don't have even half of his trackmaking skills. Wow, that really proves that age doesn't matter.

BTW, this is awesome, but I'm aware you know this, I was supporting it since you showed the track in the WIP topic

Re: [cir] [rwl] Wunstorf Airfield Circuit

Posted: Sun Mar 16, 2014 10:06 pm
by NicolasP
Yes, i have 10 years old :cool: .

Re: [cir] [rwl] Wunstorf Airfield Circuit

Posted: Mon Mar 17, 2014 8:20 am
by FRUKIScze
Yeah. You did a lot of progress. If you make some more tracks, your tracks will be 5 stars soon :up: Now it's for :star: :star: :star: :halfstar: :exstar:

Re: [cir] [rwl] Wunstorf Airfield Circuit

Posted: Mon Mar 17, 2014 12:39 pm
by ExiooPL
The track is really good. Too bad that there is no sunk tires. Nice joob. :bg:

Re: [cir] [rwl] Wunstorf Airfield Circuit

Posted: Mon Mar 17, 2014 3:03 pm
by masa
No offense, but I cannot accept your offer, because it's so the reason. Sorry to that again. Don't take it personally.. ;)

Re: [cir] [rwl] Wunstorf Airfield Circuit

Posted: Mon Mar 17, 2014 4:33 pm
by NicolasP
I understand. it's only a offer. already waiting the f-zero cars :D