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[mic] [cir] Dusty

Posted: Sun Apr 13, 2014 4:17 pm
by david999
Dusty is a track located in a wasteland region. The track abandoned some times ago, for safety concerns. But sometimes it is opened for local races and from the nearest town folks came out for some action.

Greets,

Re: [mic] [cir] Dusty

Posted: Sun Apr 13, 2014 5:22 pm
by marass
Very nice track, which seems easy,.. lets try it.
I like it, because of its GR-style,.. no trying of make real track with difficult runoffs, arrivals, and these things.
:tom: for me!

Re: [mic] [cir] Dusty

Posted: Sun Apr 13, 2014 5:30 pm
by david999
marass wrote:Very nice track, which seems easy,.. lets try it.
I like it, because of its GR-style,.. no trying of make real track with difficult runoffs, arrivals, and these things.
:tom: for me!
Thanks for reply, i'm glad you like it.:)

Re: [mic] [cir] Dusty

Posted: Sun Apr 13, 2014 5:47 pm
by YoNnie
Hmmm.. Quite interesting track, with nice desert location :) I see you improved dithering on the layout...
..But not on the surrounding (it isn't very bad but you could do this better because I know you can). It's doesn't "hurts" but I think that's the only thing you could make better on this track.
Little question: what's this 3 color points (propably from the paintbrush)?

Re: [mic] [cir] Dusty

Posted: Sun Apr 13, 2014 6:34 pm
by NicolasP
@david999, i like your tracks since Otey and you improving, again reminds other Chile location, Iquique (that 2 weeks ago have a earthquake and tsunami :vsad: ), because Iquique have a track that only is used for local races, the Autodromo Bernardo O'Higgins, see here, i gave a :tom: nomination :bg:

Re: [mic] [cir] Dusty

Posted: Sun Apr 13, 2014 7:40 pm
by david999
YoNnie wrote:Hmmm.. Quite interesting track, with nice desert location :) I see you improved dithering on the layout...
..But not on the surrounding (it isn't very bad but you could do this better because I know you can). It's doesn't "hurts" but I think that's the only thing you could make better on this track.
Little question: what's this 3 color points (propably from the paintbrush)?
Huh, i forgot them..^^ Those points are used in lmap making. I edit the track if needed, sry for it. Yeah, i think about it like you, i have problems with objects. I have some ideas with objects but at the track, the result is weird. Then i leave the places untouched, thinking: "better without weird stuff". Again.. I try to be better, and thanks for tips. So.. For all, please leave comments, and say what i need to improve. :)

Greets,

Re: [mic] [cir] Dusty

Posted: Sun Apr 13, 2014 7:54 pm
by YoNnie
It's not necessary.. I'm thinking about your track now and I think you could change PoV and zoom. It would be quite nice.. But the other side surroundings are very nice so let it stay like it's now. So you can treat it like little hint :)

Re: [mic] [cir] Dusty

Posted: Sun Apr 13, 2014 9:18 pm
by Trigger Happy
It looks excellent, the cliffs, PoV etc. You were right with not using too many other stuff. Great. :bg:

Re: [mic] [cir] Dusty

Posted: Mon Apr 14, 2014 7:27 pm
by Piet
I like your style. :nod: What a nice small track to look at!

A sidenote is that the pits is easy to cut-off. So maybe a invisible wall or a well placed object? But who's complaining... :) Thanks for adding a track to my collection.

Re: [mic] [cir] Dusty

Posted: Tue Apr 15, 2014 2:31 pm
by david999
Thanks for all replies and comments. I'm glad that track become good as the comments show it. :) If someone have more remarks about the track.. Let's say it ! :D
Greets,

Re: [mic] [cir] Dusty

Posted: Thu Apr 17, 2014 7:15 pm
by DuklaLiberec
I need to admit that I like the surroundings a lot more than the track per se. If it weren't for the neat scenery, the comments possibly wouldn't have been so positive, I reckon. Not much else to add, that's all.

Re: [mic] [cir] Dusty

Posted: Sun Apr 20, 2014 7:16 am
by david999
DuklaLiberec wrote:I need to admit that I like the surroundings a lot more than the track per se. If it weren't for the neat scenery, the comments possibly wouldn't have been so positive, I reckon. Not much else to add, that's all.
I surprised about the "positivity" and number of comments.:) I thinked the scenery is too simple and the track is just "one more thing" in the forum.

Re: [mic] [cir] Dusty

Posted: Sun Apr 27, 2014 7:04 am
by marass
Well, yesterday I had finally time for test your track, david999. And I was really impressed! It seems like an easy track, but it isn´t. I tested it with original formula with one opponent and it was really hard. The back curve was for me hard,.. I ended usually in sand and lose speed.
Really I think is it worth of nomination of TOM.

Re: [mic] [cir] Dusty

Posted: Sun Apr 27, 2014 7:32 am
by RobertRacer
I like your mini-(and short)tracks, david. This track is very good, too. Like Otey or Pond ( I like Otey and Dusty a little more then Pond), but your tracks are worth to download it.