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[stc] Morton Bay

Posted: Mon Jun 16, 2014 11:21 pm
by Dragon
Hi guys! :wave: Here's my newest track!
To celebrate my victory in ToM election with one of my smallest tracks, here's Morton Bay: a long street circuit with a section that crosses a park.
It's a different track than my usual (only El Dragon is maybe bigger) so I tried to keep my usual style in a larger track and this is the result.:)
I hope you like it, enjoy and please leave a comment! :bg:

EDIT: Shorter version is available in this post!

Re: [stc] Morton Bay

Posted: Tue Jun 17, 2014 3:19 am
by Hermes
simply sensational....congratz

Re: [stc] Morton Bay

Posted: Tue Jun 17, 2014 10:48 am
by masa
So beautiful scenery and it makes exhilarating ride.

5/5! :bg: it's a great track..

Re: [stc] Morton Bay

Posted: Tue Jun 17, 2014 10:50 am
by NicolasP
Yeah, i agree with masa and Hermes, 5/5 :bg:

Re: [stc] Morton Bay

Posted: Tue Jun 17, 2014 4:41 pm
by Gzehoo
Very nice track.

I think it could be one of the default tracks for GR2 :)

Re: [stc] Morton Bay

Posted: Tue Jun 17, 2014 5:42 pm
by FRUKIScze
I really like that feelings of opened city. I mean, that track is not closed by walls and still you know where you have to go even with white road lines. :up:
:star: :star: :star: :star: :star:
Gzehoo wrote:I think it could be one of the default tracks for GR2 :)
:iagree:

Re: [stc] Morton Bay

Posted: Tue Jun 17, 2014 7:29 pm
by Dragon
Thank you guys, I'm glad you like it.;)
Gzehoo wrote:I think it could be one of the default tracks for GR2 :)
I would be honored. :bsmile:
Is there any other comment or idea?

Re: [stc] Morton Bay

Posted: Tue Jun 17, 2014 10:14 pm
by Black Rebel
Clean and smooth. Good work Dragon. :bg:

Re: [stc] Morton Bay

Posted: Wed Jun 18, 2014 4:27 pm
by Dragon
Thank you Black Rebel! :)

Re: [stc] Morton Bay

Posted: Wed Jun 18, 2014 4:28 pm
by ivaneurope
5 stars and ToM nomination by me.

Re: [stc] Morton Bay

Posted: Wed Jun 18, 2014 9:27 pm
by Fermmoylle
Fabulous! :bg:

Re: [stc] Morton Bay

Posted: Thu Jun 19, 2014 12:39 am
by Rendy
A much better take of one of my track's concepts (but maybe due to the WS, perhaps... :scratch: ). Nevertheless, the track is very great and even deserves for another :tom: victory. Good luck there :)

Re: [stc] Morton Bay

Posted: Thu Jun 19, 2014 7:08 pm
by Dragon
Thank you guys for the comments. :) Any other idea or suggestion?

Re: [stc] Morton Bay

Posted: Fri Jun 20, 2014 10:11 pm
by Trigger Happy
The grid, possibly pole position on the other side of the road would give stronger position for T1 in the beginning of the race? :scratch: That's only gameplay detail, except that I'd love also a short layout (directly from T1 on the diagonal road to bottom-right). :yummy: In top-right there's some room for increasing the street feeling (some more buildings or pedestrians), overall it looks wonderful, especially bottom half. :bg:

5/5 :rocks:

Re: [stc] Morton Bay

Posted: Sat Jun 21, 2014 7:40 pm
by Dragon
Thank you Trigger for your comment. :) As you requested I uploaded the shorter version (available in post #1). ;)
Any other feedback?

Re: [stc] Morton Bay

Posted: Sun Jun 22, 2014 7:38 am
by Trigger Happy
Thank you very much! :trampo:

Re: [stc] Morton Bay

Posted: Sun Jun 22, 2014 8:55 am
by Emil Patanen
I was also going to ask for a shorter version, but seems that Trigger Happy was faster. Thanks for making that version too :) I agree about those things Trigger Happy complained and nothing else to add except that it could have some more hmap changes (at least on purpose built part). Now there seems to only one hmap change in the 1st corner.

Re: [stc] Morton Bay

Posted: Tue Jun 24, 2014 8:14 pm
by david999
It really deserves a ToM nomination, you've done a really great job ! :D Each configuration is really enjoyable - the shorter with its long backstretch and the longer with its left-right-left right corners in the right section. :) This left-right section (between parking place and two-lane road) resembles me to Hermanos Rodriguez track's "Eses" corners. :)
Hmap seems flat to me, but it's just my feeling. And scenery is really great, too ! :D

Greets,

Re: [stc] Morton Bay

Posted: Wed Jun 25, 2014 1:21 pm
by Mr.J
Oh my! :shock:
It's beautiful :love:

Re: [stc] Morton Bay

Posted: Sat Jun 28, 2014 1:08 pm
by Dragon
Thank you Emil, david and Mr.J for your comments. :)
Emil Patanen wrote:I agree about those things Trigger Happy complained and nothing else to add except that it could have some more hmap changes (at least on purpose built part). Now there seems to only one hmap change in the 1st corner.
I agree with you there could be more hmap changes in this track. Besides hmap change in the 1st corner, there are also hmap changes between turn 7 and turn 8. ;)
david999 wrote:This left-right section (between parking place and two-lane road) resembles me to Hermanos Rodriguez track's "Eses" corners.
I got inspired by Hermanos Rodriguez's track for that section. :bg:
Mr.J wrote:Oh my! :shock: It's beautiful :love:
That's my favourite part too.:rocks: