[cir] South Ontario Raceway V1.1 [Updated!]

Gravel, tarmac, snow. Whatever the surface, you'll find it here.
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minuseven
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[cir] South Ontario Raceway V1.1 [Updated!]

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Hello everyone!

This is my first attempt (yes, first) at a track in GeneRally. It took 3 hours or so to make and I am happy with how it came out.

Layouts included:
SOntario: Default layout, with only the last chicane
SOntario S: Shortest layout, no chicanes. (Warning, FAST!)
SOntario LNC: First chicane only
SOntario L: Both chicanes (pictured below)

Please tell me if you have any issues, and make sure to use the editor to diagnose it and make my life easier!
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South Ontario.zip
V1.1
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South Ontario.rar
V1.0
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Pic of my track
Pic of my track
Last edited by minuseven on Wed Jun 10, 2015 1:50 pm, edited 2 times in total.
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Re: [cir][evo?] South Ontario Raceway

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Nice to see new trackmakers here! But judging from your screenshot and description, this is not an [evo] track since this is just one track with multiple layouts. Therefore, could you please edit your thread subject accordingly? :cool2:
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Re: [cir] South Ontario Raceway

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Okay, fixed, thanks for pointing it out.
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Updated!

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Sorry for a double post but...

South Ontario Raceway just got an update.

Changes:
-Removed sunk tyres and added haybales to S/F straight Chicane on L and Default layouts
-Fixed AI line on L layout
-Fixed sketchy checkpoints on all layouts

If you already downloaded the track, make sure to pick up 1.1, and if you haven't, pick up the 1.1.

The old one is still available, just be careful about which you download.
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Re: [cir] South Ontario Raceway V1.1 [Updated!]

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It looks really good in general, only details - little bit odd, that there's no runoff outside 2nd turn in bottom right while all other bends have nice runoffs. :scratch: Also the walls inside chicane, it's not necessary really (compare with a similar section of a real track like Jerez, it helps to solve issues). In wall in top-right some gaps are visible, the pieces of wall are not over-lapping in ends enough. Keep them coming and don't be afraid of eperiments with hmap and with textures on lmap. :)
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Re: [cir] South Ontario Raceway V1.1 [Updated!]

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Thanks man! It's my first track so there is bound to be some issues, but it's good to hear I'm off to a decent start. Thanks for pointing out the errors, I will be more mindful of that stuff next time.
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Re: [cir] South Ontario Raceway V1.1 [Updated!]

Post by Scholl »

Really good for your first track! Great to see a new trackmaker!
I like how you tried to add some variation to the track, e.g in the last chicane.
Maybe you could try to add some dithering and show some more variations in the surrounding.

I´m sure you will improve fro track to track! Keep em coming! ;)
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