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 [stc] Gazebo City 
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Post [stc] Gazebo City
Hi all,
this is my latest track, called Gazebo City.
It's a short street cirucit around a small park, crossing a parking lot and leading along the beach.
Have fun driving and please command to help me improving my following tracks


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Sat Apr 24, 2010 3:45 pm
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Post Re: [stc] Gazebo City
Very good, I have 3 tips: the houses sculptures are not very nice. Try to do something simplier (less houses used) from them and do it manually, not only SnakeDitor. Then I recommend one leaf tree less in last curve and 4th pit crew in pits, there is enough place IMHO for it.

Other things are perfect. :bg:

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Post Re: [stc] Gazebo City
PoV is a little far from the action to my taste and the width changes are a bit annoying but other wise, it's cool :)

BTW, where is the gazebo?

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Post Re: [stc] Gazebo City
The Great Falcon wrote:
PoV is a little far from the action to my taste and the width changes are a bit annoying but other wise, it's cool :)

BTW, where is the gazebo?

Isnt that house sculpture in the middle off the track? Atleast its the only thing in the map that looks like a gazebo. :hide:
Lmap is very nice and the layout is good too. :bg:

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Post Re: [stc] Gazebo City
Ivo Porč wrote:
Very good, I have 3 tips: the houses sculptures are not very nice. Try to do something simplier (less houses used) from them and do it manually, not only SnakeDitor. Then I recommend one leaf tree less in last curve and 4th pit crew in pits, there is enough place IMHO for it.

:iagree:
only other thing i would say is that the white arrow markings on the road are a little bit too big and thick so look slightly overpowering.

otherwise i think its a neat little track :bg:

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Post Re: [stc] Gazebo City
Those houses sure are.. intresting. You should try out something more simple :rolleyes: But the track si otherwise nice :bg:


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