[stc] Gazebo City

Gravel, tarmac, snow. Whatever the surface, you'll find it here.
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preetzertrain
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[stc] Gazebo City

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Hi all,
this is my latest track, called Gazebo City.
It's a short street cirucit around a small park, crossing a parking lot and leading along the beach.
Have fun driving and please command to help me improving my following tracks
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Re: [stc] Gazebo City

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Very good, I have 3 tips: the houses sculptures are not very nice. Try to do something simplier (less houses used) from them and do it manually, not only SnakeDitor. Then I recommend one leaf tree less in last curve and 4th pit crew in pits, there is enough place IMHO for it.

Other things are perfect. :bg:
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Re: [stc] Gazebo City

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PoV is a little far from the action to my taste and the width changes are a bit annoying but other wise, it's cool :)

BTW, where is the gazebo?
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Re: [stc] Gazebo City

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The Great Falcon wrote:PoV is a little far from the action to my taste and the width changes are a bit annoying but other wise, it's cool :)

BTW, where is the gazebo?
Isnt that house sculpture in the middle off the track? Atleast its the only thing in the map that looks like a gazebo. :hide:
Lmap is very nice and the layout is good too. :bg:
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Re: [stc] Gazebo City

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Ivo Porč wrote:Very good, I have 3 tips: the houses sculptures are not very nice. Try to do something simplier (less houses used) from them and do it manually, not only SnakeDitor. Then I recommend one leaf tree less in last curve and 4th pit crew in pits, there is enough place IMHO for it.
:iagree:
only other thing i would say is that the white arrow markings on the road are a little bit too big and thick so look slightly overpowering.

otherwise i think its a neat little track :bg:
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Re: [stc] Gazebo City

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Those houses sure are.. intresting. You should try out something more simple :rolleyes: But the track si otherwise nice :bg:
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