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[stc] Gazebo City

Posted: Sat Apr 24, 2010 3:45 pm
by preetzertrain
Hi all,
this is my latest track, called Gazebo City.
It's a short street cirucit around a small park, crossing a parking lot and leading along the beach.
Have fun driving and please command to help me improving my following tracks

Re: [stc] Gazebo City

Posted: Sat Apr 24, 2010 4:00 pm
by Trigger Happy
Very good, I have 3 tips: the houses sculptures are not very nice. Try to do something simplier (less houses used) from them and do it manually, not only SnakeDitor. Then I recommend one leaf tree less in last curve and 4th pit crew in pits, there is enough place IMHO for it.

Other things are perfect. :bg:

Re: [stc] Gazebo City

Posted: Sat Apr 24, 2010 4:34 pm
by thegreatfalcon
PoV is a little far from the action to my taste and the width changes are a bit annoying but other wise, it's cool :)

BTW, where is the gazebo?

Re: [stc] Gazebo City

Posted: Sat Apr 24, 2010 5:12 pm
by Sutinen
The Great Falcon wrote:PoV is a little far from the action to my taste and the width changes are a bit annoying but other wise, it's cool :)

BTW, where is the gazebo?
Isnt that house sculpture in the middle off the track? Atleast its the only thing in the map that looks like a gazebo. :hide:
Lmap is very nice and the layout is good too. :bg:

Re: [stc] Gazebo City

Posted: Sat Apr 24, 2010 5:20 pm
by Bouncebackability
Ivo Porč wrote:Very good, I have 3 tips: the houses sculptures are not very nice. Try to do something simplier (less houses used) from them and do it manually, not only SnakeDitor. Then I recommend one leaf tree less in last curve and 4th pit crew in pits, there is enough place IMHO for it.
:iagree:
only other thing i would say is that the white arrow markings on the road are a little bit too big and thick so look slightly overpowering.

otherwise i think its a neat little track :bg:

Re: [stc] Gazebo City

Posted: Mon Apr 26, 2010 2:39 pm
by Quklis
Those houses sure are.. intresting. You should try out something more simple :rolleyes: But the track si otherwise nice :bg: