[cir] Wampa Ring

Gravel, tarmac, snow. Whatever the surface, you'll find it here.
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WAMPA RING

A snowy track that will make you hate winter! :)
This is my first track released here, have fun, friends!
(and beware of the wampa, it's hiding somewhere in the woods!)
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Well, for a first track well done :bg:
but you could have made something in the middle of a track - it looks a bit empty. :shrug:
nevertheless not bad :up:
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i have nothing else to say than, its's better than my first upload :bg:
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Snow made of not snow??? WTF??? This sucks badly. The pit line also is quite bad IMHO...
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It's clearly one of most beautiful snowy lmap, which I know. Very realistic feeling from the snow tongues. Just the few concrete walls around track are badly visible, so dangerous. :shrug:

Almost sure my ToM vote. :bg:
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The Great Falcon wrote:Snow made of not snow??? WTF??? This sucks badly. The pit line also is quite bad IMHO...
:really: :shrug:

i agree with ivo, it looks brilliant, simple clean and i love the textures of the snow/ice on the roads. the pitlane is a little excesive i agree, maybe if the 1st left right was a little less then you would also have room for something to just break up the large white area in the middle there, however i dont think it needs a lot more as i said its just so open, i can well imagine what this track would look like during the summer :lol: a slight shame that the layout is a bit squared, but i can forgive you for this.

ToM vote looking likely from me too :bg:
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This track reminds me of this video-Red Bull

Good Job! :bg:
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It looks amazing! but it could do with a few more objects.
haha tricked you ;P
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Thank you guys for the comments! :)
Yeah, there aren't many objects, I tried to create a typical winter landscape when everything is dominated by the pure white color. Originally, the track had almost no objects (you know, a winter wasteland) but that was too boring even for me.
XYY wrote:Well, for a first track well done
Thank you! But it is not my very first track, only it is the first here on this new forum. Anyway, I am not a very productive trackmaker, it takes me ages to finish a track.
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The textures on the LMAP are definitely excellent but I feel awkward when I see the fences... they look scattered and separated. Also it has already been mentioned... the concrete walls are so hard to see, and also... I dislike the pitlane very much also.

I like how the snow leaks onto the track. You have to be careful there... I like taht.
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Well, thanks.
Everything I put here was intentional. I wanted you to slow down in the pit, even without using the oil surface. The fences are scattered, as if they were installed in a hurry to block the snow. The concrete walls are hard to see but fences, soft walls or hay bales would look bad there...
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