[cir] Wampa Ring
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[cir] Wampa Ring
WAMPA RING
A snowy track that will make you hate winter!
This is my first track released here, have fun, friends!
(and beware of the wampa, it's hiding somewhere in the woods!)
A snowy track that will make you hate winter!
This is my first track released here, have fun, friends!
(and beware of the wampa, it's hiding somewhere in the woods!)
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Formerly known as mizzamar, the GRC veteran Team Miskolc racer and occasional track-maker.
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Re: [cir] Wampa Ring
Well, for a first track well done
but you could have made something in the middle of a track - it looks a bit empty.
nevertheless not bad
but you could have made something in the middle of a track - it looks a bit empty.
nevertheless not bad
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Re: [cir] Wampa Ring
i have nothing else to say than, its's better than my first upload
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Snow made of not snow??? WTF??? This sucks badly. The pit line also is quite bad IMHO...
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It's clearly one of most beautiful snowy lmap, which I know. Very realistic feeling from the snow tongues. Just the few concrete walls around track are badly visible, so dangerous.
Almost sure my ToM vote.
Almost sure my ToM vote.
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Re: [cir] Wampa Ring
The Great Falcon wrote:Snow made of not snow??? WTF??? This sucks badly. The pit line also is quite bad IMHO...
i agree with ivo, it looks brilliant, simple clean and i love the textures of the snow/ice on the roads. the pitlane is a little excesive i agree, maybe if the 1st left right was a little less then you would also have room for something to just break up the large white area in the middle there, however i dont think it needs a lot more as i said its just so open, i can well imagine what this track would look like during the summer a slight shame that the layout is a bit squared, but i can forgive you for this.
ToM vote looking likely from me too
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Re: [cir] Wampa Ring
Thank you guys for the comments!
Yeah, there aren't many objects, I tried to create a typical winter landscape when everything is dominated by the pure white color. Originally, the track had almost no objects (you know, a winter wasteland) but that was too boring even for me.
Yeah, there aren't many objects, I tried to create a typical winter landscape when everything is dominated by the pure white color. Originally, the track had almost no objects (you know, a winter wasteland) but that was too boring even for me.
Thank you! But it is not my very first track, only it is the first here on this new forum. Anyway, I am not a very productive trackmaker, it takes me ages to finish a track.XYY wrote:Well, for a first track well done
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Re: [cir] Wampa Ring
The textures on the LMAP are definitely excellent but I feel awkward when I see the fences... they look scattered and separated. Also it has already been mentioned... the concrete walls are so hard to see, and also... I dislike the pitlane very much also.
I like how the snow leaks onto the track. You have to be careful there... I like taht.
I like how the snow leaks onto the track. You have to be careful there... I like taht.
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Well, thanks.
Everything I put here was intentional. I wanted you to slow down in the pit, even without using the oil surface. The fences are scattered, as if they were installed in a hurry to block the snow. The concrete walls are hard to see but fences, soft walls or hay bales would look bad there...
Everything I put here was intentional. I wanted you to slow down in the pit, even without using the oil surface. The fences are scattered, as if they were installed in a hurry to block the snow. The concrete walls are hard to see but fences, soft walls or hay bales would look bad there...
Formerly known as mizzamar, the GRC veteran Team Miskolc racer and occasional track-maker.
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