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[rwl] [cir] [ovl] [tpk] Monza
Posted: Fri May 21, 2010 5:09 pm
by Halama
Hello. I presents my Monza tracks
Monza Full - 1085m
Monza GP - 674m
Monza Oval - 422m
Monza Junior - 271m
Autodromo Nazionale di Monza
Re: [rwl] [cir] [ovl] Monza
Posted: Fri May 21, 2010 5:24 pm
by Qurpiz
I'll just give you a couple pointers:
- I don't think you're making full use of the map; the track is rotated a bit too much counter-clockwise. If it was more clockwise you would have a lot more room for the track, giving more space everywhere. I dunno, it's just what I always try to perfect, having the layout make full use of the spaceI have.
- My pet peeve, using bushes as trees. Always looks wrong to me.
- Only 4 pits... This is the smallest of problems, however.
- The part where the track goes under the oval. You painted th oval part, which isn't wrong by any means, but this way, don't the cars just go over the oval part, breaking the illusion (yes there is such a thing in GR)?e
Of course this is just nit-picking, because this is obviously a really well-done track. It's just me only being able to criticize.
Congratz, one of the better Monzas I've seen
Re: [rwl] [cir] [ovl] Monza
Posted: Sat May 22, 2010 2:47 pm
by zgr
nice one...its ok
but i wait for monte carlo
Re: [rwl] [cir] [ovl] Monza
Posted: Wed May 26, 2010 12:09 pm
by Scorpion
Halama good job!!!!
please make a Long Beach
, ok?
Re: [rwl] [cir] [ovl] Monza
Posted: Wed May 26, 2010 4:08 pm
by Buka