[cir] TryOut Madness

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Woppoz
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Okay, first of all, hello again everybody.
I present you my second track.

Why is it called TryOut Madness?

Because I was trying some things out using the track making tutorial by G. Marques(or whatever his name was, I suck at remembering names XD)

Hope it's better than my first, please give me some tips.
Oh, and for those "open" spots, should I put something in there?
And if yes, what should I put there?
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Uhm.. sorry if I'm to early, but is there anyone with a comment or comments?
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this track reminds me slicks n slide :scratch:
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What?

I can assure you, it's not based on any track.
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Slicks N Slide was the game that :gr: was based
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Looks nice. But the road in bottom-left corner is too wide (much wider than race track), which doesn't look logical. Then the layout has too much straights oriented by same direction (parallel with sides of map), I recommend to make next one less parallel. And a hint, try to place layout to front of map and rear use as background (like when you paint a picture), the final result will be much more impressive. (Ms... is master in this, check his tracks for more, if you wish. ;)) Otherwise the map is appealing (well balanced color using) and pits have interesting solution, you did good job. :bg:
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