[cir] [mic] Oryao

Gravel, tarmac, snow. Whatever the surface, you'll find it here.
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david999
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[cir] [mic] Oryao

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Hi guys !
I'm here with a micro circuit (again?!). :) Try out and leave your post about it. :) Thx !
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Nice :) . Scenery is pleasant, HMap is great :bg: . Excellent work :nod:
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I feel exactly the same as marinator, intriguing Hmap, nice belgian kerbs, great work! :bg:
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I'm glad to hear that, thanks guys ! :)
Sorry for my spelling, i never learned english.
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This is a really good looking track! The layout maybe familiar, but with a WS this small that's okay! ;)

I really like the small touches here and there! Like the shadows on the roadside made with oil, or the muddy roads which are not very visible. Those fences look really pretty! The track is very well-made but there's a lot of inconsistency going on. Like the kerbs on the lower right corner and the one at the end of the long fence in the middle. I also don't like how the run-off just starts up in the middle( tarmac after the grass without any transition).

The track is great to race on! The last corners before the starting section are really hard.

Overall, it's a great track to have in your collection! Keep up the great work! :bg:
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I think too, the best part of this track is the HMap and i'm "proud?!":D about that.
Yeah, i felt something is "missing" from the track, but thanks for the constructive criticism (for all). :)
Sorry for my spelling, i never learned english.
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