[cir] [ovl] Test Track
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[cir] [ovl] Test Track
This is my new track. i've made by myself with the gloryer snake editor. you can critic the track.... at least, please somebody make a comment
i was arrogate that way, because i was upset if someone likes or not about it...
sorry...
i was arrogate that way, because i was upset if someone likes or not about it...
sorry...
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Re: [cir] [ovl] Test Track
- there are holes in concrete walls
- pit road doesn't look smooth
- pits are maybe too far from each others
- big bridge to the house doesn't look logical (and how you drive it if it's closed at both ends?)
- punch of trees and bushes looks bit boring (try to mix them)
- no dithering
(just by picture)
- pit road doesn't look smooth
- pits are maybe too far from each others
- big bridge to the house doesn't look logical (and how you drive it if it's closed at both ends?)
- punch of trees and bushes looks bit boring (try to mix them)
- no dithering
(just by picture)
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Re: [cir] [ovl] Test Track
1: yeah, but i'm lazy to do that...GeneSuomi wrote:- there are holes in concrete walls
- pit road doesn't look smooth
- pits are maybe too far from each others
- big bridge to the house doesn't look logical (and how you drive it if it's closed at both ends?)
- punch of trees and bushes looks bit boring (try to mix them)
- no dithering
(just by picture)
2:i don't understand what you talked.
3:the snake editor made the pits this way
4:i'm gonna edit it.
5:IDEM 4
6:what is dithering?
PS: i am brazillian, so i don't know some words in english...
PSS: Sorry for my bad education.
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Re: [cir] [ovl] Test Track
you said we are free to critique the track, then someone posts some advice.....and all you do is say that you're not going to take the advice?
Re: [cir] [ovl] Test Track
RapBR123, you need to sort your attitude out. GeneSuomi gave you some very useful advice, and you have very arrogantly responded to it.
Re: [cir] [ovl] Test Track
He said that it looks stupid when bridge leads to a single house.RapBR123 wrote: 4:you pass UNDER the bridge ¬¬
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Re: [cir] [ovl] Test Track
But there's not roads or anything going to the stands? (I mean there's just grass behind them)RapBR123 wrote:the bridge doesn't lead just to that house. it goes to the stands too
Anyway, seems like you did this track in 15 minutes. You really need to spend more time with tracks, trackmasters spend several hours to their tracks. For example, earlier today I created this small area to my WIP, and I didn't look at the clock how long did it take, but at least 1 hour for sure. And it covers less than 5% of the whole track. (I'm not trackmaster though )
Also read this, and try to learn something from the other tutorials.
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Re: [cir] [ovl] Test Track
why did you putted this picture?
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somebody has a snake editor tutorial? every time i am going to make a track in it, i make just ovals....
the new version of snake editor, please. not that one made by halama.
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somebody has a snake editor tutorial? every time i am going to make a track in it, i make just ovals....
the new version of snake editor, please. not that one made by halama.
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Re: [cir] [ovl] Test Track
To demonstrate you, what took him over hour of hard work.
To demonstrate you, how nice stuff you will be able to make, if you'll collect more skill, experience and mainly invest more patience in your work.
To demonstrate you, how nice stuff you will be able to make, if you'll collect more skill, experience and mainly invest more patience in your work.
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Re: [cir] [ovl] Test Track
Halama's SnakeDitor tutorial: http://www.gene-rally.com/download/file.php?id=104
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Re: [cir] [ovl] Test Track
Even though it's for version 1.2x, it still works for me (which uses v1.31 too)RapBR123 wrote:thanks! i add in favorites! but i was looking for the 1:31 version...
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Re: [cir] [ovl] Test Track
1. Well, that's not an excuseRapBR123 wrote: 1: yeah, but i'm lazy to do that...
3:the snake editor made the pits this way
6:what is dithering?
PS: i am brazillian, so i don't know some words in english...
PSS: Sorry for my bad education.
3. That's not an excuse either because you can fix it with track editor
6. different colours in tarmac/grass/sand to make it more interesting and realistic looking
And your education doesn't matter at all. if you have problems with english, you can use google translator or just ask
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Re: [cir] [ovl] Test Track
the Google transtator translated dithering to dithering...
so, that's not useful...
and why is the distance of pits a problem?
and thanks to answer...
and 1: i will fix it as soon i can.
so, that's not useful...
and why is the distance of pits a problem?
and thanks to answer...
and 1: i will fix it as soon i can.
Re: [cir] [ovl] Test Track
A question tells what is wrong with the pit distance: Where are the actual pits?
So where are the pit buildings and other things? That can be fixed easily.
So where are the pit buildings and other things? That can be fixed easily.
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Re: [cir] [ovl] Test Track
It looks like RaphaelACDC tried to create Barrier Arms imo.GeneSuomi wrote: - big bridge to the house doesn't look logical (and how you drive it if it's closed at both ends?
And Dithering means to create some spaces between your trees instead of having groups of them
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Re: [cir] [ovl] Test Track
Haha, all good. I usually don't look at the date on the posts.
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