[ovl] Jybonn

Gravel, tarmac, snow. Whatever the surface, you'll find it here.
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Emil Patanen
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[ovl] Jybonn

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Here's my newest track, which is a "Go left, turn fast -ring" ;) It's a small oval located near countryside. The infield area isn't very usual for an oval track.
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I like it alot. Railroad is great and field in top left too.
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I really enjoy this kind of Oval, way better than rwl oval representations, it's funny to race like this!

I enjoy it, both visually and layout-wise

Very good effort and a keeper for me

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Very nice dithering and the 3d of the railroad track is cool

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Nice and good work, HJ. :bsmile:
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Great work as always HJ, most or all of your tracks have the most detailed areas ;)
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Thanks a lot for your comments, cocney, Bel, Genetleman, Bob Barker and MattyG :bsmile:
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So, I'll comment on this one.
I very like the object details left and right to the oval, as well as the "experimental" infield area.
I don't like so much the field in left - with all that yellow it looks unnatural to me. Also I don't really like the fact that parts of the pits are hidden in booths/walls. On rwl tracks where there's not much space I even make it like this myself, but I think that you could solve this issue easily.
And about the railroad: It looks good but it's too wide. I don't know what you consider as a train's width but with all cars I tested the wheels are even far away from the tarmac. :D
Anyway, keep the good work up :bg:
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Top quality job! :bg:
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Perfect, it's great fun. :rocks:

BTW it's a reason, why always was sad, that Aleksi/Darjo didn't do few ovals while saying driving there is boring. Nt true, it's just bigger challenge for trackmaker to come with solution. :goodvibes:
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