[roa] JEA #19 - Helsholm

Gravel, tarmac, snow. Whatever the surface, you'll find it here.
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[roa] JEA #19 - Helsholm

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'A challenging wintery course through a Scandinavian wood' with a twisting up hill section and a narrow bridge! :ouch:

Well done to all those that took part and thanks for your efforts!

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Good work guys! Helsholm is good :D
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Nice work there :bg: Only have 2 things to say:
The forest in mid seems so monochromatic for me, maybe it would be better with a little house inside or whatever, and that river starting/ending in nowhere, really think that things aren't that way in real life, but IDK, maybe I'm just missinterpreting it :shrug:

So 4'5/5 for me. Oh, and I really like that frozen loch over there, awesome :clap:
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Nice work guys! :) I'll have to test it when I get home. :hyper:
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Pity, that FTer removed the ''hazard on road'' thing and didn't keep it at least in 2nd version, I think it was rather fun with the deep cuts in that following bend.

Otherwise excellent work! :clap:
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Very impressive for a JEA track, (one of) the best so far! :o

The top right is a work of art, the lake looks great and the lmap tape very subtly makes the whole think more alive. I only wish the center forest would be more consistent, now the trees in the bottom part of it have very dense treetops, while the ones in the top are less rich with branches. Also what Hiken said, a few more details in between the trees could work wonders. I'd maybe even try placing pits there, as it seems it would provide more space for them, and also solve the "boring forest issue". :2c:
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