Joint Effort Rally Project

[FRUKIScze]

Yes, I am planing to make one too, but it's holiday and everybody is going out. Generally is at the last place at holidays.

[ivaneurope]

I'd like to join JERP too.

[Marco]

I think I'll give a shot at this project to.

[Marco]

I made a stage, but I think that I still need to work with it. So any replies are welcome

[Scholl]

It looks good, layoutwise and hmapwise.
But you might want to add some more detailed dittering.
Eg. some more mud and sand around the puddles and the river.
maybe some more objects, like telephone poles. Now it looks a bit "empty"
And I think pine trees and palms are a bit more "african" than fir and leaf trees.

[Marco]

Made another stage

[YoNnie]

My stage (work in progress)

[AeroWiewiur]

add some cactuses or bushes on the desert

[Mad Dan]

Keep them coming . Just have in mind how important it is to have proper width for a car, don't make it too wide or way too crowded. Marinator should maybe rework the width on his first stage .

[Bouncebackability]

That is looking very good Yonnie, I would suggest not using gravel around the wood bridge, as it causes a loss in deffinition. and try to group trees/bushes, while leaving large gaps, they seem quite evenly spread so far

[Scholl]

@Marinator. Your second stage looks nice! Good dittering and details.

@Yonie: The desert area is very good. But don´t add too many objects. Maybe just some bushes and cactus.
And maybe remove some of the trees in the upper-area and group them as BBA already mentioned.

[YoNnie]

Thanks guys . In future I would place bushes on desert area (but I showed track without them). However thanks for tips.

[AeroWiewiur]

My third trial, but I has got experience making Rally Poland.
I try to make a stage, which is similar to previous stages

[AeroWiewiur]

I've finished

[Mad Dan]

I kind of dislike that there is no main point or anything distinctive in this landscape, it is just plain, almost pattern like landscape. The pattern looks cool but I think it needs a touch or two that would bring something interesting into it . Like a little canyon or a hill or bigger group of trees or some place that is just plain without bushes and such. It is not too bad, it is close to be reall good but it is missing something that can be fixed easily .

[XYY]

I think especially the objects are very monotonous. All "groups" of objects are placed with approx. the same number of objects in a group (2-5 bushes, cacti and leaf trees) in the same distance from each other. Just make it a little more different in different parts of the track

[AeroWiewiur]

I've added some bushes and made a bluff.

I hope that the landscape isn't too bored now

If it's good, I add the .trk file

EDIT
-new screenshot
-add .trk file

[Bouncebackability]

It's better, maybr add a booth on the roadside somewhere with some concrete posts next to like some sort of out post. And please add some more definition to the road

[AeroWiewiur]

My previous post edit

[Otto Wilson]

can somebody list the released stages for Rally Kenya, please?

BTW, i want to make a stage or two, but i have other tracks to do and a broken mouse -,-

[YoNnie]

My stage to Rally Kenya (Safari). I make second stage, but I release it much later, because I recently starded doing this, so.. it may be week, two, may be month..

Sorry that I didn't apply "real" water, but with that hmap it was impossible..

[Bouncebackability]

Really great looking stage Yonnie, as you may know I dont always use real water, it has more flexibility at times like this with that narrow trickle of water. The bridge is great as are the cliffs (not over done and visually work brilliant).

[Scholl]

That´s really impressive YoNie! The best stage of this project so far.
I agree with Bouncebackability. The fake-water looks good.
Mybe you could have kept it as a "dried-out-river", like in your previous picture. It would make it look more "african" maybe.

[YoNnie]

Thanks guys! I didn't know that my stage will be so good
Scholl, it would be, i think, quite nice, but stage has desert part and "green" part, so I wanted do this just like is now.

[Marco]

Finished my second stage(I'll remake the first one later)