Hello oneDMB!
It's great to see some new users here. However, please also upload the track directly here in this topic, if it's meant to be released here, it can also stuff our servers
talking about the track itself: I'm really curious which cars you want to be driven around this track?
Most cars that I know have got horrible grip values for oil (which you used as the surface here). While it looks good (like a really dark tarmac) it's no pleasure to drive this track with e.g. the original cars. Also I'm not a big fan of the 90° view angle, because one can't see anything of the hmap. Actually I like the preview you posted here a lot more than the actual track, as far as the view angle is concerned. Lastly, the track is very narrow and (if it can be called driving) I'm frightened of going with more than one car.
On the good side, I see a lot of potential. I already like quite much what you have done with the landmap visually (e.g. kerbs, white lines). Also you had some good ideas with the scenery, I think it's mostly fitting well to each other and it gives a nice atmosphere. I found the speedometers in the pit area hilarious, but it's a nice and creative idea
So I think if you want to massively improve the track, give it a tarmac surface at first (or give us the cars which you want us to drive on this track). Then for my taste the view angle could be adjusted, and vóila, it's a pretty decent first track
