[cir] Snakebite

Gravel, tarmac, snow. Whatever the surface, you'll find it here.
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Niko K
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[cir] Snakebite

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My first track. The name pays tribute to SnakeDitor, which is probably the most groundbreaking external program for Generally. :yummy:

Critique and comments welcome! :nod:


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I like it. I think the haybales around the entire track is a bit much though
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chapnis wrote:I like it. I think the haybales around the entire track is a bit much though
I get your point. I'll try a more delicate approach on the next track.

Thanks for the reply and critique! :bg:
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How to say it ... it's too artificial. Try to use less predefined lines etc in snakeditor and print more of your spirit (soul) to your tracks. otherwise tte track is OK (nice layout, not buggy etc). :bg:
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Ivo Porč wrote:How to say it ... it's too artificial. Try to use less predefined lines etc in snakeditor and print more of your spirit (soul) to your tracks. otherwise tte track is OK (nice layout, not buggy etc). :bg:
You're right, I got a little bit carried away with SD's features and the end result came out a bit too smooth.

Thanks for your insight, I see a lot of areas to improve on for the next track! :scratch:
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