My first track. The name pays tribute to SnakeDitor, which is probably the most groundbreaking external program for Generally.
Critique and comments welcome!
*Re-uploaded the .zip without screenshot to reduce filesize.
[cir] Snakebite
[cir] Snakebite
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Re: [cir] Snakebite
I like it. I think the haybales around the entire track is a bit much though
Re: [cir] Snakebite
I get your point. I'll try a more delicate approach on the next track.chapnis wrote:I like it. I think the haybales around the entire track is a bit much though
Thanks for the reply and critique!
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Re: [cir] Snakebite
How to say it ... it's too artificial. Try to use less predefined lines etc in snakeditor and print more of your spirit (soul) to your tracks. otherwise tte track is OK (nice layout, not buggy etc).
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Re: [cir] Snakebite
You're right, I got a little bit carried away with SD's features and the end result came out a bit too smooth.Ivo Porč wrote:How to say it ... it's too artificial. Try to use less predefined lines etc in snakeditor and print more of your spirit (soul) to your tracks. otherwise tte track is OK (nice layout, not buggy etc).
Thanks for your insight, I see a lot of areas to improve on for the next track!
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