This is my second track, IMO this looks better.
Please comment and
Have Fun!
[stc] Estella
[stc] Estella
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This is my second track, IMO this looks better.
Please comment and
Have Fun!
This is my second track, IMO this looks better.
Please comment and
Have Fun!
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Re: [stc] Estella
You made few mistakes.
Football stadium is out of perspective.
Trucks near pits are bad made but those in top left are very well made.
There is too many stands in middle IMO.
Pits reminds on Monte Carlo GP.
Football stadium is out of perspective.
Trucks near pits are bad made but those in top left are very well made.
There is too many stands in middle IMO.
Pits reminds on Monte Carlo GP.
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Re: [stc] Estella
Not really sure, but the entire track feels... weird. There's something wrong with it, but I'm not sure what it is... nothing feels 100% out of place, and yet nothing fits. Might just be me.
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Re: [stc] Estella
It has very nice, unique atmosphere. 
I'd welcome more care about object placement, but overall the spread of details on map has sense.
For 2nd try it's amazing. 
I'd welcome more care about object placement, but overall the spread of details on map has sense.
For 2nd try it's amazing.
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Re: [stc] Estella
cocney wrote:You made few mistakes.
Football stadium is out of perspective.
Trucks near pits are bad made but those in top left are very well made.
There is too many stands in middle IMO.
Pits reminds on Monte Carlo GP.
It somehow "ruins" the scenery of the track, and that's why I don't like it that much. I also would remove the "pit" inscription on the asphalt. 2/5 overall.
Re: [stc] Estella
Great job for a 2nd track, but there are quite a few things that make the track look a bit odd.
- The road markings are too thick for the world size (except for the start positions, S/F line and the parking lot on top left, those are in perspective).
- Football stadium lines are also too thick, along with the whole perspective of it.
- The middle section is really cluttered with stands, more object variation there could achieve a lot, or even some free space would be nice.
- You should try to place walls more carefully, especially if they are uniform with corners, it's a tedious job unless you use SnakeDitor, but it's really worth the effort either way.
- The PIT-text is not necessary, but I don't mind if it looks clean and in perspective, now it's just too big and sketchy looking.
- The pit lane is too wide for my taste, especially the entrance, I'd prefer for it to be half of the track's width at most.
Don't be put down though, just take note of the comments you get and keep grinding, it takes a while to get the hang of it.
- The road markings are too thick for the world size (except for the start positions, S/F line and the parking lot on top left, those are in perspective).
- Football stadium lines are also too thick, along with the whole perspective of it.
- The middle section is really cluttered with stands, more object variation there could achieve a lot, or even some free space would be nice.
- You should try to place walls more carefully, especially if they are uniform with corners, it's a tedious job unless you use SnakeDitor, but it's really worth the effort either way.
- The PIT-text is not necessary, but I don't mind if it looks clean and in perspective, now it's just too big and sketchy looking.
- The pit lane is too wide for my taste, especially the entrance, I'd prefer for it to be half of the track's width at most.
Don't be put down though, just take note of the comments you get and keep grinding, it takes a while to get the hang of it.
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