[cir] [kar] Weimier
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[cir] [kar] Weimier
Here's a new version of the track, with no more regular trees, or bridges who point to nowhere.
hope you like his one
PS: i adjusted the pit line, so it don't take space of the track.
hope you like his one
PS: i adjusted the pit line, so it don't take space of the track.
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Re: [cir] [kar] Weimier
HOLY SHI-! Youve been improved alot!
But thats a bit too long for a kart track... More like a circuit.
Really thats an awesome track!
But thats a bit too long for a kart track... More like a circuit.
Really thats an awesome track!
Re: [cir] [kar] Weimier
you're making awesome tracks now
only one thing the bushes and trees are too regular
without that i think it's perfect
only one thing the bushes and trees are too regular
without that i think it's perfect
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Re: [cir] [kar] Weimier
i made it for kart because the width is low. but you can play it with other vehiclesSutinen wrote:But thats a bit too long for a kart track... More like a circuit.
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Re: [cir] [kar] Weimier
OMG!! I wouldn't have expected this much progress in this short time
and now you see you can build good tracks.
,Cause I dislike the Kerb - too small and I don't like it all around the track
But keep it up!
and now you see you can build good tracks.
,Cause I dislike the Kerb - too small and I don't like it all around the track
But keep it up!
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Re: [cir] [kar] Weimier
as has been said already, a massive improvement so fast so well done there, and i like the layout, simple and fast.
however, as maxi17 said, bushes and trees are too regular, which looks very odd and unnatural, same applies for the stones along the coast line.
some other points: there are soo many stands, and arent placed very well, again like your concrete walls before, just take a little more time when placing objects, the stands between the bridge and the hairpin for instance are really jerky with lots of edges sticking out.
i personally am not a fan of the use of bridges either, and when they are used imo there should be tarmac roads either side, like you did on youre test oval these are just a few point i can see quickly that you can improve on next time.
but there are many distinct improvements in your trackmaking, keep going
however, as maxi17 said, bushes and trees are too regular, which looks very odd and unnatural, same applies for the stones along the coast line.
some other points: there are soo many stands, and arent placed very well, again like your concrete walls before, just take a little more time when placing objects, the stands between the bridge and the hairpin for instance are really jerky with lots of edges sticking out.
i personally am not a fan of the use of bridges either, and when they are used imo there should be tarmac roads either side, like you did on youre test oval these are just a few point i can see quickly that you can improve on next time.
but there are many distinct improvements in your trackmaking, keep going
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Re: [cir] [kar] Weimier
I'm no expert on making tracks, so for what my opinion is worth... I like this
A huge step in the right direction. Well done!
A huge step in the right direction. Well done!
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Re: [cir] [kar] Weimier
what do you mean with that?Silky1974 wrote:I'm no expert on making tracks, so for what my opinion is worth... I like this
A huge step in the right direction. Well done!
wasn't you who made the stunt arena?
Re: [cir] [kar] Weimier
That's good But that one white line which closes the pit road looks strange
And the story was whatever was the song what it was
Re: [cir] [kar] Weimier
Great! On the other hand it's a bit lifeless :S But with your progression I can predict you a nice trackmaker career
BTW I started to build a hillclimb track.
BTW I started to build a hillclimb track.
GuEss what's coming up nExt!
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