Track Ideas, W.I.P. Previews and Teasers v2

marass · Post by **marass** » Sat Sep 06, 2014 6:23 am

Almost ready to release I think. Any ideas what to make better?

Cocney: I think not,.. I think dithering is well made.

cocney · Post by **cocney** » Sat Sep 06, 2014 7:42 am

Bottom-left, big muddy spray trace is not needed, and hmap is...interesting. Smooth it a bit.

Darjo · Post by **Darjo** » Sun Sep 07, 2014 7:17 pm

marass wrote:Almost ready to release I think. Any ideas what to make better?

Cocney: I think not,.. I think dithering is well made.

- Fix the hmap, those bumps are just way too extreme and don't seem to fit very well the context (I mean, the muddy road seems less bumpy than the modern looking road?)
- The way roads are placed doesn't really make a lot of sense to be honest
- I'm not sure if you still have to finish the road lines, because they look very sloppy and inconsistent
- The trees block the view in top left

marass · Post by **marass** » Sun Sep 07, 2014 8:01 pm

Ok guys, I will do with it sometime (argh, I just making stuff to school)
I hope I will make it within week.
Thanks for advice.

cocney · Post by **cocney** » Mon Sep 08, 2014 4:58 pm

Darjo wrote:- Fix the hmap, those bumps are just way too extreme and don't seem to fit very well the context (I mean, the muddy road seems less bumpy than the modern looking road?)
- The way roads are placed doesn't really make a lot of sense to be honest
- I'm not sure if you still have to finish the road lines, because they look very sloppy and inconsistent
- The trees block the view in top left

What bumps? By roads you mean track or those near track?
I made this track for tricky driving and fun. I succeeded in first, others will decide if it is amusing or not. Whole point of this track, in first place, was to play with hmap.
Road lines aren't finished, and trees block the view only if you run out of the track (another thing to add to trickiness)

My GeneRally 2 profile · Post by **TuomoH** » Mon Sep 08, 2014 7:48 pm

cocney wrote:What bumps? By roads you mean track or those near track?
I made this track for tricky driving and fun. I succeeded in first, others will decide if it is amusing or not. Whole point of this track, in first place, was to play with hmap.
Road lines aren't finished, and trees block the view only if you run out of the track (another thing to add to trickiness)

He's talking to Marass.

NicolasP · Post by **NicolasP** » Mon Sep 08, 2014 8:08 pm

Sochi Autodrom

cocney · Post by **cocney** » Tue Sep 09, 2014 2:40 pm

hahahahaha
Sorry guys! Misunderstood

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Merged double reply from Tue Sep 09, 2014 3:40 pm:

hahahahaha
Sorry guys! Misunderstood

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marass · Post by **marass** » Tue Sep 09, 2014 4:13 pm

It's OK cocney

reynaldo123 · Post by **reynaldo123** » Wed Sep 10, 2014 2:09 pm

NicolasP · Post by **NicolasP** » Wed Sep 10, 2014 2:23 pm

Autodromo Internacional de Chile, release date 18 September, Chile national day.

@reynaldo123: The CoD weapon track are almost good, but put the dithering, and the forests have a only type of tree, i ever make for my forests Fir tree+Leaf tree+Pine tree

and the Mordecai and Margaret track is good

, the dithering is almost good, and i think that Mordecai is more Ice+White colour than Ice+Snow.

AleksiNir · Post by **AleksiNir** » Wed Sep 10, 2014 4:44 pm

@Np2003: That layout is actually really good, and the surroundings you've done so far as nice as well, but there are a few things that could be improved, and it's actually mostly related to the concrete walls. You've left awkward gaps between the walls and other stuff (forest, tarmac roads) in a few places, instead you should just put the roads/trees right next to the wall, so that in the track editor the circles of bushes/trees overlap the concrete walls.
Also the placement of walls is weak in some places, especially in the parts where the walls are curved, since it doesn't look so smooth. I've attached a picture with some alternative suggestions, as well as pointing out some of those gaps I mentioned. You should also keep in mind that every part of the track doesn't have to be surrounded by walls, the track often looks a lot cleaner when some parts of the track are left "open".
I would also strongly suggest you to add a 1 pixel line of tarmac after the white border line. The white line also looks a bit edgy and weird at some points, you should see if you can make it smoother. And one last suggestion: zoom in a little bit

NicolasP · Post by **NicolasP** » Wed Sep 10, 2014 5:45 pm

More progress...

reynaldo123 · Post by **reynaldo123** » Wed Sep 10, 2014 10:24 pm

minor edits

Bif44 · Post by **Bif44** » Thu Sep 11, 2014 2:17 am

The track series included is called Palmring and is a teaser for a pack I hope to be releasing at some point. Any suggestions for improvements?

Wojtek · Post by **Wojtek** » Fri Sep 12, 2014 6:10 pm

Autódromo Internacional de Guaporé

reynaldo123 · Post by **reynaldo123** » Sat Sep 13, 2014 2:21 pm

finishing areen track:

(areen's post: http://forum.generally-racers.com/viewt ... 206#p93206)

RobertRacer · Post by **RobertRacer** » Sat Sep 13, 2014 4:19 pm

Good track!

You made Areen's layout to one of the best tracks. At least on the level, that Areen could did, maybe even better.

NicolasP · Post by **NicolasP** » Sat Sep 13, 2014 5:10 pm

Hi again, more progress in Autodromo Internacional de Chile and new WiP, Beijing ePrix.

RobertRacer · Post by **RobertRacer** » Sat Sep 13, 2014 5:34 pm

You're the 1st, who is making Formula E tracks.

Keep it going!

NicolasP · Post by **NicolasP** » Sat Sep 13, 2014 5:49 pm

@RobertRacer99: Thanks

Areen · Post by **Areen** » Sun Sep 14, 2014 12:45 am

reynaldo123 wrote:finishing areen track:

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(areen's post: http://forum.generally-racers.com/viewt ... 206#p93206)

Good job, really!

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Kenny195 · Post by **Kenny195** » Sun Sep 14, 2014 9:16 am

@Np2003 Good work! I'm waiting for your Tracks! Keep up!

NicolasP · Post by **NicolasP** » Sun Sep 14, 2014 11:52 am

Kenny195:

NicolasP · Post by **NicolasP** » Sun Sep 14, 2014 2:06 pm

Sorry for double post, i go to make AVUS'95, the track are how 2km, but what WS fit good?, i know that not fit good a 255 WS.

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